Please re edit this novel, so many errors,I hardly understand
update pleaseee
The term "terrible" falls short in describing this novel. The characters possess IQs below 50, and continuity issues are rampant. The concept of "wrong think" should exist, considering the context.
The main character is a typical, neutered, brainless male chauvinist without any redeeming qualities – not even by refraining from rape, which would be the bare minimum expectation.
The antagonists are portrayed as purely evil, resorting to mean actions and justifications for violence. They're easily dispatched because they are inherently bad.
Initially, I believed the high-value individuals were treated kindly due to their potential to turn against them. However, this theory was discarded when the military simply barged in, massacring people upon discovering the MC's charge had a 30,000 value. They acted impulsively, oblivious to the consequences, like killing her friend's father led them to wanton destruction.
The author fails to consider the cognitive limitations or rational thought processes of the military characters. It's a glaring lack of depth and planning throughout the narrative.
"Don't dismiss the story just because some people criticize it for the harem or the seemingly unfaithful protagonist. Let's look at the harem aspect more closely. The 'eight wives' aren't simply there because of the main character's desirability; each has a genuine reason to love him.
Kaori fell for his bravery when he protected a grandma and her grandson from a thug, using humor to embarrass the assailant. She admired his courage and developed a strong affection (bordering on yandere). Yue owes her rescue from centuries of isolation and later support during a crisis, and both she and the main character share magical abilities.
Shia saved her family and trained them, and they owe their survival skills to him. They also possess similar magical powers. Tio became obsessed after he awakened her to the M-world. Aiko emotionally saved Aiko by helping her overcome a mental breakdown during a high-altitude battle against an apostle. Shizuku fell in love when she experienced care and treatment as a girl for the first time, despite societal pressures. Remia, a mother figure to Myuu, chose to marry him for Myuu's sake.
Liliana's love grew from him saving her from attempted rape and assisting her in overcoming a political crisis.
It's important to note that the main character's strength, which allows him to save these women, is unmatched in the world – he can even defeat a god. Additionally, he didn't pursue relationships with anyone other than Yue until Volume 5 of the web novel (Volume 7 of the light novel).
The characters' power levels are justified through their experiences, such as Hajime's relentless training, acquiring god-like magic, and genius-level intellect. Each woman's growth is also a result of their own efforts, training, and unique abilities.
Even the side stories, like Kousuke Endou arcs and the Tortus journey, enhance the overall narrative, making the after-story just as compelling or even better than the main plot."
In summary, the harem isn't arbitrary, and the主角's strength and the development of his relationships are integral to the story. The characters' power and growth are well-explained, and the side stories add depth to the narrative.
Perfect run is also great
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Hii I've read till chapter 137 on a site and it was last updated in September. If it's okay with the admin can I share the name here?
They may not update the tags because I've already finished the novel. But I have to tell you, there's a lot of harem... HahahaHahahaha you believed it. It's a lie, I just came to say that this novel has MANWHA. A very good one actually, its drawing resembles LEVELING
so they're at chapter 1159 and haven't seen the bigger picture yet?
It's really adorable, and I hope it gets updated soon. The translation quality is excellent!
Ignore reviews prior to chapter 70; the content before that point mainly sets up the background. The story improves significantly as you progress. Wait until you reach the angel battle scene before forming an opinion. The protagonist's power is only exceptional compared to regular humans.
It's an engaging narrative about a clever and cunning character who rises through the ranks within a theocratic society.
Comment section is more interesting than the novel itself Lamo