A fantastic story ...keep it up!Characters are like, can relate to reality.
The beginning of the novel is good. Your approach of making the introduction(chapter 0) philosophical is intriguing.As I read further, I found the build up to be good too, even though I thought some things were odd, but that didn't affect the quality and flow. The scenes are interesting and that seems to be your strongest point so far, like, you are very good at writing moments. The problem I had in the middle is how much of it was "filler". A decent bit of it was character information and skill information (system time) that didn't really move things ahead but rather slowed them down and broke my immersion.I can't say much about the character design since there's not much to go off of. Most of the beginning was action and it's in the most recent chapters that you started showing his initial disposition. I guess we'll see...
I really enjoy your work! I'd love to stay connected and keep up with your latest creations. Do you have any social media or email? It would be great to be in touch~
When i read the synopsis of a boy recarnated with the help of a dragon, I was instantly hooked. A really nice story and i appreciate the way the author has told it . Just added to my library.
Love the development of this story. Good writing ?
who wouldn't want 5-star reviews hahaha. but let's be real its not happening. As the translator I will try my best so please support me!I loved the other novel by the author so I decided to translate this one too.there will definitely be errors so please inform me to fix them. i will use the power stage names from the world's apocalypse online here to make it easier to understand . so if there is a power realm that I've gotten wrong please inform me.
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AUTHOOOORRR KEEP GENERATING CHAPTER UNTIL YOU DIEEEE AND MY SOUL,VOTE, AND POWER STONE WILL BE YOURS!!!!
I’m rewriting my review since I was inconsistent in updating for a while due to health issues. Now, I’m fully back!About the book—personally, I think it’s great. It might not be the best novel you’ve ever read, but it’s definitely worth giving a try.I recommend reading the first few chapters to get a feel for the story. As for world-building, you might notice that some details are missing, but that’s because this is a book series. I originally planned to follow through with the other books sooner, but my health delayed things. However, even with some missing information, it won’t affect the overall experience.Here are some points to know if you are not interested in going in blind:- Romance (yes) - Harem (No, It might seem otherwise at times, but trust the process..) - Genius Mc (yes) - System (yes) - Comedic (yes) - R18 scenes (in the future, yes, but not too much) - Dark (yes, it gets darker as we go on) - weak mc (not really) - overpowered mc (yes, I love OP MCs) - World building (Integrated into the story through character interactions, locations, descriptions, and system conversations—no info-dumping!)- Narration: The story won’t focus only on the MC but also on supporting characters, though the MC remains the main focus.If you have any questions, pls askkk... and leave me a review, I need it.
Nice workkk! This novel has potential a lot. Please continue updating author nim <3
Yo nice story bro, what a unique story keep up the good work and i hope you succeed and if you have time you can read mine too!
even though I haven't read yet but it's looks interesting