After that short chat, Mr. Neighbor-I-don't-know-who went disappear into his house. Devon did not miss the look when the neighbor mentioned Nicole. That neighbor like his fiancee but he doesn't feel any jealousy at all which is not normal in a relationship. He just prayed that if ever Nicole decided to ditch him and pursue with that neighbor is perfect so that he will no longer feel guilty for dragging her in his messy life. Another bugging thing about the moment is that he seem to be attracted to this mister.
"Oh, sorry... Would you like to stop and take care of this first, or keep going and fight while horny?" (Tuare)
(1) Calla in Born from a divine Gamble works on the same principle. It doesn't matter that they sometimes eat somewhere else. In the end, they will always go back to the place where they get the most delicious meal. Her mother told her. As a man myself, I'm not sure this is actually true but who can turn down a fantastic lunch?
At the same time, a notification ring out indicating that he had unexpectedly failed the test. This test was designed to help student verify their knowledge so they would know whether what they had learned is correct or completed.
(Lexa)
He bolted upright and immidiately examined his hands.
Lu Duyi: "For now, I'm still young. Slowly, I'm going to change. Life is like that... but Shuya shouldn't worry about me. And neither should you. I have my way. You guys have yours. But since you guys have been offering me lots of 'advice' today, let me give you some. Be honest with yourself. Don't you think you'll regret it if you don't get together with my sister?"
Rou smashed at them with his battle Axe with the intent to kill. The assassins were very nimble compared to Rou so they dodged with ease. But Rou wasn't a run of the mill kind of warrior. He's an elite of the Iron Guard! A pride of the Axe warriors! No matter what kind of obstacle he may face, he will either cut it down or smash it down.
"ok, I guess that's fine for the time being. Now then launch a palm attack so that i can see how to improve your situation."
I think your concept about "system" is amazing. But your concept about "skill" or "ability" is suck dude.Reason :1. You never give description about ability or skill whose MC got. (Not all readers known animes and systems you are adapted)2. There is never ever disposable skill or ability. The disposable skill named "scrolls" in fantasy story. And that not in category skill but in category item (disposable item)3. Why dont make skill have level? And you can upgrade skill level by use poin too.4. If you want make there are a limit chance used item, you just need skill. And regenerate the chance used every day / week / month / year.Example :Level 1 : chance used : 100x (max : 125) regenerate 1 chance/weekLevel 2 : chance used : 100x (max : 250) regenerate 1 chance/5 dayLevel 3 : chance used :100x (max : 500) regenerate 1 chance/3 dayLevel 4 : chance used : 100x (max : 1000) regenerate 1 chance/dayLevel 5 (max) : chance used : infinityIf you can understand this. Thanks dude.Because i feel a little confusing when read your story. (I only known famous anime)
"heh fine if I cant see with my eyes i'll look with my minds eye haiya~!!!"
please try to fix the translationIt's giving me a headache just trying to understand