humu humu~ this is really exciting !!!!!!
. need more
I just like to know, how did a npc know the term players? And how did a npc learned about another game when there are no relationship with the each other? Not like it's a combined game.(I only read the chapter 1)Just curious
I wasn't sure about this at first, but after reading the first couple of chapters, I got more and more into it. By the end of the chapters, I was super engrossed, to the point that I couldn't stop reading, and when I hit the last translated chapter, I felt immense frustration that there weren't anymore chapters left! I haven't felt this way about at webnovel book in such a long time, honestly I really like this idea, I find it quite unique and interesting. I hope this gets picked up for official translation! It just got to the good part too!! I hope the quality will remain the same, because if it does, this might just rival my favorites.
it's a good story that's updated quickly I just wish cultivation stories wernt so long I've seen them with over 5000 chapters I don't think even the wheel of time series was that long
First off I want to say it's rare I gave something a full 5 stars. But I couldn't find any flaw big enough to warrant a 4 star in any category.Great novel so far that has lots of things that make it differ from novels of the same type.The author seems to regularly ask for the opinions and feedback from his/her readers about what they think and what they want to see and not see in the novel.So far the MC is pretty great, hes not super meek or arrogant so far (let's hope it stays that way) So far he seems pretty normal and I can see myself reacting the same way as he does to a lot of the situations.Not sure about the romance yet as it's still early but it seems to be doing well on that front and has lots of potential. It also has pretty funny humor and I find myself laughing at most of those moments.It's managed to separate itself from all of the VR mmo novels out there and I find myself checking for a new chapter everyday.Love the novel and recommend it even if you hate VR mmos and the like!
This is a well written, if slightly plain story so far. I like it. It's a nice casual read.This is a well written, if slightly plain story so far. I like it. It's a nice casual read.This is a well written, if slightly plain story so far. I like it. It's a nice casual read.
The translation quality and speed is fine but I feel like the pacing and story development is so infuriatingly bad that giving anything higher than one star would be unfair to anyone who starts reading the story. The author has officially been lost in a single 'climb the tower' arc now for hundreds of chapters. The chapters are so long winded and filled with nonsense that it makes the filler in TMW and MW seem tame. If you do feel a desire to read this story wait until it is over 500 chapters. Apparently the author gets his sh*t together by then.
Sorry buddy, I thought I had reviewed your story before. I remembered that I reviewed other works, but I had forgotten about yours. I'm reading the first few chapters. Thank you for understanding
Honestly, at first I thought this was a good novel. But after reading a few pages I realized that this novel was too classic, and the plot was predictable. I'm slowly getting bored. When I was in my tens I didn't really want to read any more, this oath was really bad.
I wanted to like this one sooo much but it really revs up full throttle on the Chinese superiority. I don't even mind a little tuting of the Chinese horn I'm proud of my country to for the most part but it's super cringe when most of the story revolves around it.
Overall, the book has a decent start [review as of chapter 70]. Below I have my take on good and bad. Author, thank you for taking the time to create!Good:1) Fights are well described and easy to visualize2) Author does a good job of showing when MC is being smart and when he just thinks he is being smart3) Best friend character is not "Fatty*" [seriously this is worth a whole star]4) So far, his motivations are not due to any annoying tropes like sick family, unreasonable desire for revenge, kidnapping, etc., which I find to be an amazing deviation for usualBad:1) His parents really, really suck. Now you might say that since they are shown that they care about the MC they are good parents, but they did absolutely nothing to train him. In a world where power is everything, going to a good school requires being a good fighter, they refused to train him. If that is not neglect, I do not know what is. They are actively risking his life for no reason. MAYBE, the 4 star general dad had an excuse that he could not personally do it since he was busy, but they are rich enough and have powerful friends, I am sure they could find someone to help. During a training arc, someone has to explain basic, crucial terms to him. He was not even told what things mean, I mean how awful can you be that you cannot even provide your son a glossary.2) To me, it is/was a mystery how strong each of the commandments are. Let alone what happens when you switch. So far, we know you can get new abilities, increase talent etc., but that was not explained at once, it took like 40 chapters for definitions of power to make any sense. There are characters described as being 2nd commandment fighters. Okay, so, is that strong, middle level, apex power? That is not at all clear during my read through until later chapters. 3) This might be just me, so not as strong as #1, but the MC gets mad at every little thing. "If I wasnt hiding my powers I could beat you!!!!!!!!1111!!!!" Truth is, he cant. The MC is too big for his breaches which is fine in a weak to strong type MC, but he keeps getting beat down and never learns his lesson, makes it seem like he is throwing a temper tantrum that someone who is 2 whole levels higher than him, is in fact stronger.4) The author keeps referencing some "big event" in the past. I get it can be part of the story later and helps to define personalities and interactions of your main cast and chapter 70 in a webnovel can be just the beginning. But it comes up too often for all these vague terms in conversations to make sense. When your aunt and mom privately talk about sometime important, they would not likely talk about "the incident