Hello, Author here. This is a story I started on a whim for WPC #192 and somehow won bronze. The first 20 or so chapters are just me searching for directions I should be taking this novel to. So, many ideas that pop up there don't last for long. Especially, the dual personality. However, the world I build up during these times is not random. Also, please do not expect the MC to be a genius or something, and just enjoy what he does.
I really liked this novel. It had a great idea and nice plot. But sadly the story was suddenly finished after chapter 224. It's really like the author thought bam I don't wanna write this anymore how can I finish this in one chapter. The plot doesn't leave an open end as some other authors do when they just drop their story but still I am a bit disappointed. (That's why I gave it only one star for story development.) The system is about acting. (system, plays in reality, fighting and action with the police)
Nice writing style, great story development Has the ability to make one engrossed in the chapters. I love the characters, how the author is able to depict them vividly was simply brilliant
The book ends at chapter 337, but is dropped, not completed. It was a waste of time reading, and webnovel should have the status say dropped instead of completed. Thankfully, it is easy to find these novels elsewhere so I will never have to pay for an unfinished novel labeled completed again.
This story is quite good. i found out about it after reading their other book. i wanted to see if they had more books because i liked their writing style so much! This book did not disappoint! I hope they will continue updating!
Very good novel....nice balanced cheat.... level headed MCQwertjondrygrghdtysghycghsfhgsfhfevhysghfxhtchgffghghgdvvxvvxcxvbbghdhhfghfhdgjbds
Not a good novel, read it and it seems too Clichy. Anyway it's my opinion read it for yourself and determining whether it's your cup of tea or not.
Decent, neither a good nor a bad read. It is exactly what you want to read when you are listening to music or just plainly relaxing on a corner.
for the author I have two words "*uck you" I was almost late work today on other news love the story ........,......................... ........ gg . ggdtjcigifigigitjdhdhridhtoditjdjfjfjtotox
The story draws you in at the first part, and immidately when it starts, potential is seen in this book.
its a well thought out start to the novel, the two characters are well written.i read the authors brothers novel.so here i am, you should give it ago.
Read about 40 chapters and had to stop reading (for now) . Very interesting world and the story seems to also become more interesting . So why did I stop? Well unless you like to read how pretty much every side characters (I guess at least once every chapter) are stunned and/or amazed by how the MC is a guy instead of a girl, how he has such soft skin, and how it makes women envious and men jealous, then this will get on your nerves.The characters designs are often also a bit boring. Instead of describing a character based on unique features (like a crooked nose), you get to hear why someone is beautiful or average. In other words telling instead of showing.It is also hard to gauge the intelligence of this MC. Sometimes he sounds smart, like using a rock throwing game in his favour. Other times he sounds like a idiot, like when he dismisses a skill allowing him to shoot through walls without considering any other uses for it like being able to penetrate armor or shields.If you can read past those kind of descriptions every chapter then I would definitely recommend this. The game is fun, the world is great, and the class is one I don’t think is used often. Props to the author for writing an interesting novel, I just need a break from all the trap and beauty descriptions.