Review time! 19 chapters.Well, the sypnosis explained what is going on. MC's girlfriend is a reincarnator from 6 years in the future.The world is going to be struck by a disaster when an ancient civilisation will be awakened and humanity will fight against it. Magic and all.Though in the first 19 chapters it will be the meeting of the mc and his girlfriend. Note: the girlfriend is very creepy and does not know how to court somebody. But at the end of the day the mc finally accepted that she's a reincarnator and became her boyfriend.When he accepts it he gains a system. A boyfriend model system. People with romantic interest and high favorability for the mc will give our mc a part of their abilities/stats. (This is a red flag for harem)Btw, mc's girlfriend is overpowered.Translation Quality: 5* (as always)SoU: 5* (as always)Story development: 3* (It's okay)Character design: 3* (No comment)World background: 3* (Just a modern world and future explained, nothing special)Overall score: 3.8Personal score: 3.5 (till chapter 19)
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The story so far has been solid. It a coming to age adventure tale with a non-iseki protagonist. The protagonists ability is interesting and fun to see. Overal has a lot pf potential!
this guy humanity is as thin as paper,..........................
what else do you expect from this kind of story..? well..same old, same old~ system as the golden finger, then checked in idly, then slapped others one by one~ yeah this kinda thing.. anyway, tq for the author and tq for the translation team for the hard work
In the year 2050, a massive spaceship appears above Earth, causing panic among the governments of the world. A humanoid alien emerges from the ship and introduces himself as the ancestor of humanity, claiming that his species distributed their life code to various universes and galaxies in an effort to recover their numbers after a war. The alien goes on to reveal that nuclear energy will be removed from Earth and replaced with a new form of energy called mana, which has multiple uses. He also announces the installation of a dimensional dungeon system to challenge humanity and help them become stronger.While the concept of an ancestor alien visiting Earth and introducing a new form of energy is certainly interesting, the execution of this idea could be improved upon. For example, it is not entirely clear how the alien's announcement of the removal of nuclear energy is received by the various governments of the world. Additionally, the explanation for the existence of humanity and their connection to the ancestor alien species could be fleshed out more. While it is mentioned that the lack of mana on Earth has made humanity weak, it would be helpful to have a more detailed explanation of how this has occurred and how the introduction of mana will change things.Additionally, the concept of a dimensional dungeon system to challenge humanity is intriguing, but it is not entirely clear how this system will work or what its purpose is. More information on the specific trials and challenges that humanity will face, as well as the rewards that can be earned by completing them, would be helpful in fully understanding this aspect of the story.The character of the ancestor alien is also somewhat lacking in depth. While his physical appearance and the fact that he can communicate telepathically with humanity are certainly interesting, there is not much else known about him. A more detailed background and personality for this character would add depth to the story and make him a more fully realized character.Overall, while the world building in this story has potential, it could be improved upon with more detailed explanations and fleshed out characters. However, the concept of an ancestor alien introducing a new form of energy and a dimensional dungeon system to challenge humanity is certainly an interesting one and has the potential to be developed into a compelling story.
it's the first story I've ever read so in my opinion it's better than most other apps this is my first review too so tell me if I do good ..
here's my review for the first 46 chapters..Writing quality is pretty good. there are some mistakes here and there. usually it's like a "we're" written as "were" or something similar.For updates.. well i actually binge read these chapters but it seems like there is 2 chapters in a weak release time and for such a good and interesting novel it feels too slow.. personally i would like 1 chapter every day but if author has other things in life so he/she can't do such speed then it's understandable.Story development is good.. it's quite fast, not too fast. there are almost no cliche monents and no useless filler like some novels where a whole chaptee could be just others reactions at mc faceslapping everyone and showing how awesome they are. I like that mc is going towards rune and array dao and not alchemy. I hope there will be specific explanations to how runes work and how they correlate to math and sciense and explanations to what qi is and other things..Mc is very relatable.. indeed like the synopsis says his actions are more human like.. they are logical and other characters are like that too.. I don't like some characters personalities but there are no very arrogant stupid characters so far, all named characters have character growth.. well some may look pretty dull but maybe there will be more known later about them and their stories. I personally feel like if i was cultivator i would be very similar to mc.Also i hope that there will not be romance.. I know that girl.. was her name yimu.. anyway she has feelings toward mc.. but we have to understand first that they are soon only 11 years old.. they are just kids so no need to create romance at that age, also we have already seen killings which is pretty disturbing when thinking they are 10 year old.But also mc really feels like he should fully focus on cultivation.(array dao is also cultivation) Mc has his big goal to explore the universe and search more knowledge about the universe and cultivation and qi. It is basically the most important plotpoint and kind of also plotarmor that mc will in one way or another become the strongest cultivator.. even if it's his pure talent towards cultivation and comprehension talent or he gains some lucky chances to inheritance or similar etc. And If mc has a wife in the future she would have to have similar talent so she can live forever too or mc would have to reincarnate her.. which would all be too cliche.. All kinds of plots have already been used where mc has a wife who is a daughter of a big clan or something like that. and she has special body and will be taken away from mc in one way or another. also to have a wife constantly in the story being basically main character too wouldn't really fit this story.so.. whew.. in conclusion rather have friends but no romance and have mc going towards the peak of cultivation and let us follow as he explores and does research to runes and arrays and qi.For the world building.. we don't know much.. i like that it's not just the basic lower world, middle world and upper world type but actual universe and they live in a planet.. I guess we have to wait till he is 16 until the continental tournament arc to know more about the world. i guess there will be time skip before that because it took 46 chapters for 11 months from the beginning of the novel.. which isn't slow but if we think that about 50 chapters is 1 year then we have to wait for a very long time. If you have read all of my review then congrats ? that was 3560letters/characters
To be honest, this book is totally acceptable; nevertheless, what shocked me was your portrayal style; you appear to be a professional for someone who is conducting research, and the plot was ok... It was thrilling in the beginning, but the climax was a letdown...and the MC is weaker than his peers, even with a system?... this is a disappointing fact...but I still enjoyed it.
This is a new author with no experience. Thank you everyone for your support. Please give your suggestion for story background of new arc before each arc ends and I will try to create a story that will be enjoyable to best by my readers and supporters. ❤❤Thank you .