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This is a intense novel to read. The villain thinks of some unique ways yyo kill off the characters. But the question is who is the killer and who will die next!!!
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A few things really pissed me off reading this, the fact that he distrusts the AI, which is literally a computer and computers don't lie, like wtf, then there's the fact that he asks her stupid questions and not smart ones like is there any way to raise my stats other than leveling up and stuff, and the fact that when she tells him something, he for some reason feels the need to repeat it in question form, i like the idea but the main character is really fucking annoying
I think this novel has potential but the translation errors are crippling it. The system that the MC receives is OP but it plays a minor role in the plot. I am interested to see how Mas (MC) develops.As I mentioned before there are translation errors that start to ruin the immersion of the story. If it does get picked I hope that the quality increases. Overall I enjoyed this in spite of the errors. It would probably be amazing if it was better translated.
I was really enjoying the story of Charles and his adventures in a sort of polytheistic; magical; Victorian-Style world. There are no steam engines, but it gave me a feeling like steampunk—in a good sort of way.There are a number of unexpected turns. The story has not gone premium—for which I was thankful.I dropped the story, because the Protagonist, Charles acquired an ability that let him grab-bag steal a random memory from a client, while simultaneously erasing it from the client's mind.He erased perhaps 20-years worth of memories from a young woman. Granted, he mercifully slew her afterwards, but who is to say that he won't steal a memory or two from someone and leave them alive. in the future? That is far to heinous an act to commit on ANYONE—I don't CARE how wicked they are.I read to be entertained, not to read about sickening Sadism.
The grammar does need a little bit of editing. But that's just a technical part of being a writer. The story matters more. For a webnovel, the idea is different and somewhat unique. Video game lovers would definitely have a blast, reading this as they embark on a fantasy adventure with the characters. It's 8 chapters in so I cannot comment on the story development yet. Please do update more :)
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Aghhh! I'm still on early chaps but I gotta say, this book is soooo gud! The grammar is oof! There aren't many mistakes to say and the writing is perfect. Not too simple to feel repetitive and not too hard to comprehend.And poor Ren... Arranged marriage eh TwT... but hey, at least she's a princess ??u200d♂️ xD. Anyway, adding this to library, gotta come back here huihuihui.
This book is very good and looking forward to more chapter.
Pretty Average, funny misunderstanding tropes with system.However this is nearly a complete rip off of that one novel where the MC is the young master of the #1 demonic sect, and direct disciple of the #1 cultivator in the world, who he confessed to by accident when the jade he sent to a junior sister went to his master instead.However it seems that his strength is controlled by the system? Not sure since there's insufficient chapters.The only reason i'm rating so highly is because I liked the one I read before, even if I forgot the name.
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