This novel is... Not great. The grammar Is so painfully bad that I can’t actually read anymore. Mistakes here and there are fine, but literally every sentence takes me out of it. Please if you write a book at least use grammarly or something. Also the writing has been... bad. Often times the author skips foreshadowing and straight up says “something is going to happen” before it happens and without foreshadowing. Its absolutely frustrating.
mc is a naive child with extremely low eq, he is like one of those idiotic emo wannabe villains, I personally didn't like his character ... the grammar was also bad ... But some people might like the mc who knows ?
~~As of Chapter Twenty~~Been an enjoyable read. We have a down to earth Mc who spent his last life wanting to become a police officer buy due to physical health he could past the exam, later becoming a legendary private detective (in his own right) solving many crimes the before the police leading him to past catching up having home experience a retaliation death. Being transmigrated in a in a world similar as his own with everything thing the same, but with a difference here and there. He works as an intern police detective with his golden crime investigation system.The system so far is one of my favorite there no shop or anything like that the Mc runs into a crime and system may give him a mission to complete within a reasonable time frame based off his current capabilities if he succeeds, he rewarded and if he fails to solve it or solves it beyond the time limit he just do not receive any reward so basic no punishment he get what he earned.The reward itself are not op themselves, but can be if used right for example, he may get something like one of his six senses enhance or another skill related to be an officer. Plus his interaction with other characters are lively to me and does not just feel like he is talking to himself along with the decent way the author intertwines his work, social, and love life I honestly cannot wait for this to be released.
....is it 1v1? please tell me it's not a harem PLEASE!!!! I can't handle harems anymore please tell me it's just one couple. I'm begging someone spoil me ..........................................................................................................................................omg I did all this and I can't post does that mean I have to rate? ugh ok whatever
1.6M views and only around 35 reviews? Is the author deleting reviews or what?Oh well on this webnovel platform such thing is normal I guess
Not too shabby. While the beginning stumbles a little as it tries to find its voice, tempo, and emphasis, it eventually settles into its own rhythm.MC could be described as OP while attempting to prove that he is not OP. He always has enough points or luck or items to do everything. At first, Inn is squished to the side as MC does dumb things on earth, but thankfully, before I lost my patience, Inn returns to center stage, with MC's shenanigans diminished. If the author ever considers rewriting the beginning, it is advised that they devote more time to the inn and either reduce or move the MC's shenanigans later. Many low star reviews are about absence of inn in beginning chapters: “Not even half of the first 20 chapter is actually about the Inn.”/Rappel; “This has great potential right until chapter 10. The author completetly ruined their work.”/KIING (10 chapter introduces cultivators on earth and shifts focus from inn to MC shenanigans on earth); “Forced plot with cultivators and his family.”/Elder; Readers dislike for cultivation probably comes from two facts: it takes away time from the inn and every world and dimension has the same type of cultivation. All worlds have similar feeling. It is almost bad as MassEffect color ending. Choose your world, one has humans, other world has humans and dead humans, third has humans and animals, but all of them have cultivation and humans! Even none humans look like humans. Overall, readable novel if you don’t mind OP MC, cultivation, and aliens that are all human.
Easily the highest quality story on Webnovel. I find it hard to find anything really bad about in. If you dont like harem or r18 scenes then it might not be for you. But I have to say, until now, the Harem has not been messed up, which is an achievement of its own. Great comedy. Great characters. Great story. Very much hoping this will go into the 1000 chapters.
At this point they should include a tag named "made in china" so we can filter what we don't want to read before getting fked by webnovel everytime we search for a good novel.Also the website's/app's algorythm is so bad that a novel with a 3.8 score gets to the voting pool
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Author can you continue with the novel ? I really think that it really is a good concept that you have here and a lot of us would like to continue reading this story ..... ?????????????????