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Classic trope of otome games. Except the MC is an extra (or NPC). It’s funny how he always “Accidentally” foiled the Protagonist’s plans. The interactions between characters is meaningful. The plot is surprisingly deep. Such as politics intrique, schemes, and business. Very recommended to read.
Hello guys, author here?. I’m giving a five star review for myself, yeah ’cause, I will most definitely do so for myself. My blurb may not be eye-catching enough but I promise it’s worth every reading. Check it out and you won’t regret it. Daily updates will depend on your power stones and golden tickets. So add it to your library NOW. ???
This book is amazing!!! I’m super excited to see it progress! The MC is a very realistic portrayal of a real life person LOL.
what a great novel it's rear to see angle novel and this novel mark one of the archangel novel that got me hooked. ?? ?
The Good: We have a fairly easy-to-understand setting and a MC with plant-based abilities is fairly unique. The world appears to be large and full of different groups than just humans and not the typical fantasy tropes. (Elves, dwarves, demons sorta thing)The Bad: The writing quality starts to slip. I can understand this because you start getting your flow, and you let it spill out onto the figurative paper in order to keep it going. Just remember to read the chapter after you finish it. A LOT of details are missing especially around the abilities and Thally. Early on Seth keeps saying Thally helped him, but we are not shown that help. Lastly, only once or twice are we given any background information about the world around the characters. A lot of details can be inferred from the text, but I had a hard time getting through some parts since I kept having to figure out certain things on my own.The Neutral: When you write, try to think about the perspective of the reader. If this is slowing you down or getting in the way, go ahead and finish the chapter first but then go back and read it again. A lot of the holes will be filled in automatically as the author, but readers cannot do the same without some details from the author. We don't need to know what their school uniforms look like since it is fine for each reader to imagine their own ideal uniform, but I don't know anything about Seth's appearance. You have something good going on here so keep it up. Your first story will be rough, but keep going and it will get better. You have a story you want to tell that you think others will enjoy so keep going and show us your story!
i would rate this story 8.5 till now. could be better.
A cunning military man with many lovers creates a compelling and intriguing narrative filled with drama and complexity.
Awesome sauce powerful and hilarious all in one
Writing is fantastic and the story is so engaging! Such a creative premise! Love the characters and will simp expeditiously ?? 10/10!
writing this during midnight, writer Please write more! for all of you, it is NOT a simple reincarnation story. The plot twists are... oh my god. and it's all connected. I came for a normal villain web novel, stood for the twists.
Common has a way with words and can construct a scene with great precision. Awesome job! Give this story a chance and I doubt you'll regret it. We can only hope for more chapters to release in the future.