Its ight, I can guess the development of the story line as the leader of hoplites civilization suddenly disappeared must have a connection to this world he dropped in too, I also wonder how he'll fight when his ammos dwindle out. Either he finds more escape pods of his creemates ඞඞඞඞ or that of the aliens. And he'll then use their ammo and weapons, or that he'll find a facility that is connected to the leader of his civilization. Anyways just a retard trying to act smart
Great story, good word choice and great envisions. You can imagine what the story and characters look like and it updates every day. Great author and good story
Good luck , keep it up with the good work nana , always a pleasure to read another story of yours , still you need to focuse on some writing improvements , overall , all good :3
woah Lyra ??i wish I could be this strong when it comes to loving someone. I'm jealous ???
I love MelissaI love the name I love her personality I love the characters I love the contrast between the twin girls amazing Amazing ?????????????????
For a "modern" story, the world this takes place in is still future dystopian. The world building is somewhat there, but it seems that organized crime is the true government in all the cities. The focus on the MC has distracted from better character development of any of the peripheral characters leaving the story to feel unbalanced. This could get better over time. I've really enjoyed MVS and think it had better direction and focus from the start. This story needs more of both.
Oh, yeah, I saw a lot of authors writing reviews for their own books. I don't really get the point....probably another description. I guess I wanted to write something I would like to read? yeah, that was kind of it. I hope you'll like it!
Please don’t stop this story. I need lots more
I hope it's good. My only suggestion is please increase the number of chapters each day... thank you
good book, my rating is only so low cause i rated the stability of updates 1 star. the reason being that the updates are so inconsistent and slow, btw if the author mentioned something that was making him be slow on the updates in the latest chapter, then sorry cause i havent read the latest chapters as i am trying to wait a little so i can binge it
Five-star review from a selfless reader—sorry if the spelling isn’t perfect. I make a lot of spelling mistakes here and there, and while I use Grammarly, it often makes things worse for me. This story is a prequel to an upcoming one, and I hope you enjoy it. However, I understand if you don’t, as we follow four main characters, with a different one being the focus of each chapter. I get that it might be annoying.
"That's right, and I will drag this creature out of your body."