after sign in at least give something reasonable. Sun god lower body, Sun talisman, Devils eyes spell etc. These are all unreasonable and no one can connect it with anything. I know that these novel have Chinese origins, so Chinese belives and myths are added.But make it simple, no one want to see an mc that is just getting powerful. A game ends when you play all levels.
What ruins this story for me is that it puts itself in the setting of Perfect World, an already established novel. It's as if the author felt too lazy to make a world of their own.What is especially disappointing is that the synopsis doesn't even mention a bit of this, but is intentionally misleading. The story doesn't even feel like it will abide by the original novels plot, more like the author just took the names of the characters from Perfect World and bastardized it.
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Your book is worth more than five stars, your choice of words is great and the flow is just wonderful.
I've read all your chapters and can't wait for the next, thumbs the author up, you are a talented writer.
Good job author, you improved chap after another, great story with amazing writing style, i loved the mc and your descriptions. The plot was well written and your knowledge made great touch to the chapters keep up the good work
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Loved the premise. Strong start. The prologue is dark and foreboding. Excited for what is to come. Five stars for now. Will make a follow up review after more chapters arrive...
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It's a Great book. Honestly, has the potential to be top 100. If only you didn't put the paywall so soon, I'm sure more people would have picked it up. I was lucky that this book was offered to me for free for 24 hours, so I made it deep enough to actually be absorbed in the story. You should've leave the first 20 chapters to be free so reader can really get a taste of how it's going to be. Not to mention, you picked a very unique genre.Anyway on to the actual review,. I give you huge props on Story Development and Character Development. Granted when it comes to wrestling, I do enjoy the actual match itself rather than the buildup, so it's fun to see it from a different perspective.Your character development in Brent, Rob and Dacey is awesome, especially in the later chapter. And what I love the most is how 'weak' Rob is. He is a proper underdog that actually rising without a cheat but sheer hard work. Unconsciously, you made interesting conflicts that normally would've been pushed aside in this type of novels.Now is there a flaw?Maybe a bit slow. But in all fairness at Rob's current position, I do understand the extreme details Also good couple btw?
I have been looking for another hand to hand combat type novel with such action scene detailing just like the legendary mechanic. Give it a try guys, it's quite good.
I read a total of 18 chapters, the first 5 could be considered descent chaps but from chap 6 plotholes, bad translation, horrible world building and contradicting character desings.This novel is just trash overall 1/5.
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