Well this is weird. I found a manhua named "Dr.Don" with a similar storyline but that had different names. That manhwa stopped updating at chapter 81. If anyone know about this, please reply.
MC's wife said that he don't want to accept his husband's help to introduce some connections because she wants to be independent. But she accepted kenneth's building the connection for her. For real? Really?
Huh
Waste of time. 1.5/10 rating. Stupid, useless ridiculous female who is bitter and can’t let go of her ex. She is quite bitter to the bones when it comes to her sister. Her thought process is weird, she played tennis so hard bec she found out this is only where she excelled her sister. That means she is jealous of her sister. That thinking is not good. U do things bec u want to not bec it makes u feel superior to other people. No wonder she was dumped. She was so focused on besting her sister. Even after 3-4 yrs she is still hang up on her ex bf. In psych perspective, she is only like that bec its her sister, if its somebody else she wont be that much troublesome. Jealousy really brings out the bad in people. I stopped reading at chapter 20. The FL has no outstanding characteristics. Waste of time and money.
Excellent novel
I'm a reader from China, and I still learning English for my University exam. I can said that this novel are not bad and the words are more nice for me. Although there have a wrong word or a grammar mistake, while I comment it, the author will make a correction as fast as I just go to a toilet. Hahah
The story are good, and hmm I'm not good to gave a review, but the book is very good and hit my target.
interesting start to the story.
waiting to see how the story will develop and pan out ◡̈
i really like the way the author accentuates the characters and give them each their individual personalities and overall a good read 9.9/10
-12 chapters in-
Another novel with a main character who should be OP right off the bat but is stifled by various rules and regulations.
The mc has 1 unique aspect and thats his “infinite domain”, which sounds cool but just means he can continuously expand his territory, like every other god in every other novel like this. Except, for them, it’s just assumed they can expand there territory and they have another unique trait, here it’s his only unique trait.
There is essentially no world building. We know of a forest, city, and a town ridden by plague. We know nothing about the worlds size, structure, or history. what is mentioned is not described at all.
The mc is supposed to be the first god on this planet but for an unexplained reason, he’s late 3000+ years and Is significantly far behind the rest of the gods.
Theres no character development. The mc has no goals or aspirations. He probably has some but the author doesn’t tell us a lot of things, like the other 60+ gods are all familiar to the mc and how, maybe, many people from earth were transmigrated. The first girl he meets is one dimensional and takes an interest into the mc for no reason. The family that worships mc aren’t described and they have no personality.
The pacing of this novel is odd. The mc is setting up his personal followers, going to school with, I assume, only the goal to get stronger, and he’s learning about his place in the world. These three major plot points will be discussed multiple times within one chapter with very little actually being achieved.
While it doesn’t bring much new to the equation of saving the villainess otome isekai otome game more than makes up for it in some of the best excecution I’ve seen in some time.
Characters: The protagonist and love interest are likeable and have great chemistry, the antagonist is deliciously hatable but not too the degree where it effects the readers suspension of disbelief, (as a side people like that exist I have met them), side characters aren’t neglected at all and have enough spotlight placed on them that they are memorable but not so much that they steal the spotlight from the main cast.
Pacing: it retains a good forward momentum so that you feel like something worth reading has happened but doesn’t feel rushed. Plot points don’t feel needlessly dragged out and every word feels as if it serves a purpose rather than being there to increase word count.
Settings: the setting is a typical magic school otome setting nothing really of note here but the story is character driven so that doesn’t retract from the quality overall.
Release rate: a good stable one chapter per week with consistent quality, minimal typos, and moderate length.
Writing Quality: Great, it’s clearly been properly proofread, the author clearly cares about this story and i haven’t run into any instances where I had to read a section more than once to figure out what’s going on.
PS: to the author, originality is overrated, execution is far more important so don’t take my comment on “not bringing anything new to the equation” as a negative point.
you should read The person who challenged a god: clueless reincarnation ?
Perfect idea but was not edited properly like the quality terms for talent always changed and other stuff like that