Came in with somewhat high expectations. It's not even readable as wish fulfillment. Idk how the author managed to do this tbh I'm impressed, it's like they messed up every part that could've been enjoyable.
Is Just me who is missing some explanation at the start???Its Just starting… Out of nothing…
So far this books is of amazing quality. it's interesting and unique in a way, while keeping your attention with every passing chapter. overall it is one of the few books worth a second read or maybe even a third when it gets higher in chapters which is it's only weak point, the update schedule is a little slow. This is of course counteracted by the great chapters with great length, but overall its current read time is less than 2 hours. still good one, author 10/10
I honestly love everything about it, it's genuinely a good book and I'd recommend it to anyone tbh(though I don't really have anyone to recommend it to its the thought that counts).
Thank you for the novel. The story is good and I like the the army of undead. I think it can be the potential for this novel. I like it. Just keep updating... ?
Same author as Castle of Black Iron I believe. He's making the same mistakes yet again. Story barely began and already racism. Plus already started the filler crap. A whole chapter about a freakin bow and what its made out of, a weapon that's gonna become useless after 1 or 2 more cultivation breakthrus. Considering its the beginning of the novel, he's gonna breakthru quickly. Was a whole chapter really necessary for a bow that might be with us for maybe the first 100 chapters?Plus trying to make the MC smart when he's just kissing butt. A little butt kissing and everyone around him falling head over heels for him.Now he's gonna make a gun? Whats the explanation gonna be? A whole chapter on Chinese education system thats so outstanding that they prepared him to make anything anywhere? <- Sarcasm Also: SAY MY NAME!^
I know the mc is supposed to be a nice person but when those 1000 or so people died I was kinda hoping he would be indifferent or just somewhat sad and guilty about it. Kinda hoping for an o well instead of a it wasn’t really my fault but I’ll go above and beyond to make it right. Would’ve have been a nice change from ur usual mc.
Author could you please Increase the pace?
I hope that this book will be selected is much better than similar novels (the mc has to find out how to improve his skeleton himself, and not, as in others, the system gives step by step what you need to do to improve the pet)
FINALLY A NOVEL WITH MONKEY KING. I will definitely read it when more chapter is out. I CAN'T HANDLE THE CLIFF HANGERS! lol but GOOD LUCK MAN
Wow, this story really grabs my attention along with the personalities ofnthe characters and their design. Im very interested in seeing where this going. You have my full suppot shadows finger!!
Overall it was a great novel, I felt the system aspect was really let off after the first few exciting chapters also the ending is awful like the author just gave up and wanted to slap a ending on a tandom chapter. I loved the healong aspects and the romance betweeen Wang Yao and Su was amazing and really wholesome.