Oky so generally I like how the story is going, most especially with the constant training they go through to try and defeat the main Villan of the story the Grim Reaper and Hajun
I'm only on chapter 49, but I find the chapters very short. Apart from that, the story is interesting, although I don't particularly like mechas. I don't like the beginning: a boy who can't move or speak suddenly becomes healthy and op, and somehow nobody questions why this happened. Very implausible.
this story is so well written. Each character is complex and well developed. Even more importantly, they are funny. The MC is an excellent mix of sass and delightful innocence. The ML does a good job at towing the line between obsessive devotion, and respectful care. So far, there hasn't really been any of the toxic pitfalls that you usually see in this kind of trope.Overall: 10/10 a good read
I've finished reading 11 chapters so far, and I am glad I read this piece of art. The writing style is very descriptive, making it easier to imagine the current scenario in my mind. The story is well paced and I can relate to the main character because of how he enjoys spending his time in the forest, away from the crowded city. If you want to read something original and fresh, then you should read this book. You'll surely like it after you read a few chapters and get a clear understanding of what is happening. I did not spoil the story for you so that you can enjoy it better, now go and read it!
A suprising good Novel, so far. The MC awakened as a F Rank Lord, the lowest and weakest Rank of the Lord System, which is pretty much already seen as useless, almost lower than a unawakened Human, As F Rank lords have not more power than common Humans, but are still needed to fight. The MC in this Novel is, of course, much more, but he still doesnt stray from the F Rank landlord path, and endures insult and acts weak, as F rank Lords, and Newbie Lords, are restricted from many chances, that other higher Ranked Lords have, to get Stronger, as to not waste any Ressources (Or Maybe protect higher Ranked Lords, in my Opinion). So MC here is enduring and acting, as far as he can(While Human massen have a superficial biased opinion), to bid his Time to grow Stronger, as he will be OP, but is not at the moment.The System and the Flow of Story is also very nice, as the System isnt Omnipotent in this Novel, as it looks like that Humans can control part of it, or influence it.So far is the Novel very good, but it is also a Novel, where you cant be sure what else is going on, as many things happen, not rushed, and without 200+ Chapters it is still uncertain if it stays Good, get better, or worse.
Hello, dear author! I've read your novel and it's really great. Please click on my profile picture, where you can find what you need,I can give you more power stones and comments.I found this novel to be a surprisingly captivating read. Although the plot started off slowly, it steadily built up a multi-layered exploration of family dynamics and inner struggles. The emotions were beautifully depicted and the characters were incredibly nuanced and well-developed. I was pleasantly surprised with the rewarding ending and the thoughtful themes brought up in the novel. Anyone looking for an emotionally engaging story should definitely give this one a try.
The novel is very good. for me, I will stop reading it because the course of events indicates that the protagonist will become a knight, and I read about a hundred novels about knights or a magician who becomes a knight and it has become very boring for me. If the protagonist of the novel becomes a pure magician, will one of you or the author tell me, so that I can go back to the novel? My situation is not because I hate knights, but the novels that contain a pure magician and not a magician who uses a sword in combat has become very rare anyway. The novel is very wonderful, but it is not for me
Honest ly this is a story that I am 100% addicted to. This story has such incredible details that make the story so much more powerful and more interesting to read. I haven't read something so good in ages. The references to songs,shows/movies, good always makes me chuckle because it makes me think about my memories and the way the guided me. This story has made me think about my past in a good way because of the specifics to details! Keep up the great work and I can't wait to read more of your amazing creation and too to ignes devolve more in character!
was here for the cover , stayed for the writing
There are lots of mistakes with grammar, like it is a translation but not translated well. It might be a good story if the translation was better but I only got through one chapter. Hard to follow and doesn't flow well with grammar problems.
I’ve got to give myself a pat on the back. Writing a novel is no small task, and creating stories that resonate with people isn’t easy. Props to me for making it happen! ?
Good setting and pacing. It's also engaging and unique. Nice few chapters in, so continue updating.