Roffy123
This novel is pretty dark so far compared to most but its not done purely out of shock factor. The gore and mention of certain things just come naturally as the story has progressed. I'm curious to learn more about Zero and how MC acquired it
The protagonist of this work does not know what diplomacy and restraint are in relation to other lords with whom he may well conclude an alliance and there is a feeling that this character does not understand that he has not achieved anything on his own and all he has is all thanks to the system and in fact not his and he should have thought at least once that if everyone gave it to him so easily, then they can take it away with the same ease, well, no, this character is so stupid that he makes enemies where he could make good friends
I Just want to say that if you are looking for a decent batman, its not in here. This batman has the brain of an imfant, along with the rest of the characters. Exampleflash:"can he be the Rider?" Batman:"highly unlikely because he said he hates violence on public TV" Ghost Rider apears where mc goes, so mc prepeares an excuse, What excuse you May ask? "Rider saved my life so I follow him everywhere and help cleaning up." which nakes no sense. Because acording to his excuse, Rider needs to appear somewhere and the mc comes. Yet mc is a world known figure so the news of him coming Should spread first. And then the Rider. So he either somehow knows where Rider will apear or its Just a lame excuse.
anyone knows about it's raw novel name plz tell me
Honestly realy good story, is not just the basic story that is repeated over and over. Would 100% recommend!
The power scaling isn't super clear and can't really appreciate the difference in power. Perhaps an aux chapter and a chapter that has a little combat. MC doesn't have to be the one to fight
Eh, en la novela hacen muchos chistes que no entenderían los que no son de China, a la traducción no es satisfactoria, el ritmo hace esto un poco aburrido, no se presentan ocasiones interesante.....eh, una pregunta ¿por qué siempre el mejor amigo del mc es siempre gordo?, solo por curiosidad...en fin no la recomiendo.....
Keep it up I would love for this novel to continue updating in the future……….……….……….……….……….……….……….……….……….……….……….……….……….……….……….……….
So there aren't that much chapter yet but What I read it is amazing! I really love the plotline and hope that it continuous the in upcoming chapter .It's definitely worth reading.
its quite good and no young master in just 20 chapters but i dont know if theres any in the next chapters. ............Want more!!!!!!
Quite interesting, but the depiction of the characters in my opinion is quite lacking. Stay positive...................................................................
The structures of the sentences is pretty bad, in a later chapter idk I did an expample.
The story could be good, but as I said the structure of the sentences is so bad it ruins the flow of the story. Some grammar mistakes here and there.
Story nothing new, but till now havent seen any story which has done a good job at writing such a story,pretty sad
