"Hehe, let's go, we shall visit to see too." the instant he finished, the young man became an after image.
Then how did he put Sasuke and Orochimaru in a Genjutsu before?
Bleiz thing for a second before he reply. "Young Master, I remember, there is one item we can use as a temporary storage, it was one of the items we can buy at the Functional Item Shop. the Time Void Box." Bleiz said.
"I do not." Moving up I grbbed her by the waist. "Come on let's at least keep them in eye range. I know you have been wanting to give me a piece of your mind already."
"How did you lose consciousness?"
I can feel it swirl through my meridian points, it feels even more effective than magic.
"Anyone got a cookie?"
42 (2002/07/31)
I swear it’s like every authour on here has some sort of pact where they need to make their mc a spinless coward when it come towards dealing with women I honestly dont get it. The story isn’t that bad well at least the starting chapter the whole tournement arc was meh. When you read something that says monster girl harem in the title and have an mc that proudly proclaim that he’s gonna make one in just the first couple sentences you have certain expectations and those have truly not been met. Idk maybe it gets better after chapter 40 (doubtful)
love the storyline. But can you try making it a bit not too easy for the MC. Besides that this story is op and dope
overall pretty good, can't even think of any constructive criticism..................................................................................
Hello i love your book but it lack followers readers, and rating, am not sure if you have any social media platforms so we can discuss better