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There's so much to cover but I can't spoil it, unfortunately! At first, I thought this was another eastern novel but I was quickly surprised with how fast the story shifted. Writing Quality: Despite the writer's first language not being English, most of the scenes are described quite well. Excellent story-telling and the dialogues are quite realistic. Remember, however, that not everything in a scene needs to be revealed to the reader, like specific locations, numbers, etc. leave a bit of imagery to the reader :)Stability of Updates: Too soon to tell but they seem to be on the right track. Just keep writing every day and try to make deadlines for yourself. My goal is 3 Chapters every day before the afternoon, practice makes perfect.Story Development: If I could go 7/5 I would! As soon as they talked about the borrowing system a few chapters in all I could think about was FMA and FMA: B regarding 'Equivalent Exchange.' I thought that was one of the most interesting concepts to ever exist in anime because the MCs aren't typically overpowered as they have to be creative with what they already have.You can already tell that the MC is crafty and resourceful, so it'll be interesting to see how he uses this new system and for what.Character Design: Excellent work describing each of the characters and making them memorable, from the names to the way they act. Bravo!World Background: I could easily visualize each place they were in, imagery is imperative in fiction and it seems like you know what you're doing -- you're already a ways ahead of your competition.In conclusion, love the book so far, love the idea, and can't wait to read more! P.S. With English being my second language I can totally relate to you as I can see the minor mistakes you're making in your work (imagery, diction, and sentence-structure wise) if you'd like to talk we can exchange discords :)
Like the plot! The author hooked me in the first chapter, it was written-well. This book is realistic fiction and I knew this book wouldn't fail other readers, it would suprise them even. A good book is when the author knows how to write the emotion that could connect to their readers.
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This metalinguistic novel type is awesome, everyone that ever gave a try to writing or any kind of creative job know the difficulties. And this novel cover all of then perfectly, it is great to see that other have the same trouble as me.
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At the time I write this review, the first arc has been concluded. So far, the storyline and character developments are in their early phase, but remain solid nonetheless.
The MC is a very clever person, kind to his family and allies, but has no qualms in eliminating any threats.
He has the tendency to focus too much on magic and is sometimes self-centered, but I can guarantee that he's not a selfish and evil person.
He's ambitious and tenacious. He's skilled, but not conceited. Most of all, he's human, so he's not perfect.
I hope you all enjoy this novel as much as I loved writing it. Thanks, everyone.
the book is amazing it has a good story development and good writing quality ?.the only problem is the world background feels rushed but apart from that it's a grate novel
It's too good of a story that you'll feel addicted to, the author has done a very good job, keep it up ??you should upload it daily, that's the only complaint i havehave a good day
I really like it so far ch 5 I hope you update it more often it's good and has good potential hope to see more of it soon! ..................
First 1 to 5 chapters it made the story in a stable connection with the plot as I read it. as a reader at first I really did immerse myself into it. then comes the 6 to 10 chapters now its getting interesting hope more chapters to come its a bit on the hook "Bitin"
I really like how your novel is going so far! The protagonist seems really interesting and I love how the plot is working out! I can't wait to see what will happen in the future and how your story develops.
Can't say anything about stability of updates since this is just 60 chapters. Howerver, as for the rest? EXCELLENT!! No spoilers. But if you like MC that are witty, smart, funny, action orientated. Plus you think zergs are cool. You must may like this story.That or you played diablo 3, starcraft, WOW and etc. This is a good adaptation of those franchises and makes for some good cross universe rom** and capers. Give it a read. You just may be entertained like me.