Really good novel, highly recommend it for those looking for the supernatural genre ?
Sanguine Essence technique you should add a chracter like Choso from JJK he would be so cool with as a vampire. He is pretty much a vampire. But i like your story
I Love the Characters and their relationship.
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You've beautifully expressed your thoughts
Okay-ish novel nothing that great but not trash either
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It is the story of an average person getting a portal to the technological world, up to the 17th chapter, there is no young master, no scheming, just a boy starting his business with robots. Update of one chapter is very slow. I need at least 10 chapters a day. Need more, update fast. Grammar and connotation are slightly misplaced but the overall story and character development are good. There isn't much to think about, the story is straightforward and enjoyable to read.
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One of the good novel with Evil MC. The whole story is developed pretty nicely, putting me in an awe. The writing quality is good, there might be some small minor mistakes, but otherwise there are almost no mistakes.Like I pointed out, this novel have a preety good plot development. The main problem for me is that I somehow feels that the story feels slow paced. But in return, we gets a deep interaction and immersion in story.Character Design... This is a good point! The characters are developed quite well, you can see various different people with different personalities and powers. But the main problem is that MC feels a bit off. He gets memories and start to acts as if he is completely numb to emotions. I mean he preety much directly do it with his mother without any hesitation. (Yeah there's Inc est but the story is developed pretty good and you will not frown upon their relationship). Which seems a bit off.Updating Stability is good. The releases are frequent.World Background. Now here's a problem. Although author has given quite detailed description, it's still quite difficult to figure out the whole situation and things (ughhhh! I don't know why, but I can't turn my thoughts into words)P.S. Just realised that I haven't rated the book. (￣ヘ￣; )
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C17Please make the MC smarter and more mature, or at least polite. I know he was a bigshot, but its irritating he keep cutting off someone else dialogue. he is exactly a muscle head just like how he describe his first disciple survivor. Other than this only problem, the whole story is very interesting.