For the FPs. Interesting start. I might just finish this one.
I am le author. I need your help. I want to be better at writing narratives, so please, please, read it and tell me what I could do better, you don't need to give me anything, not even a review, just comments telling me about my short comings, I'm only human.
awesome, and its one of my favorite.5star for this novel.
Add more chapters. To eliminate curiosity
Author San, this novel is a dime a dozen...pls give us 2000 chapters of pure chaos..we will follow you till the end?????
More updates…it’s a really good novel…keep it up author ?
The two gods live in different places, Light lives in Mega-Supernova and Dark lives in the Black Hole. They like to make their creatures on earths.
"As you wish Master," said Jester while giving potion.
"FUC-" She slaps the back of my head
"Oh I ate the Human-Human Devil Fruit and it let me do things humans can do like speak and understand complex stuff like medicine which is why I'm the ship's doctor" Chopper said with pride.
With that everyone began to leave and make their way back home, however, "Rias, Akeno can you stay here for a little while longer please" Both girls were confused by Gohan's request but both just nodded in understanding.
She repeated herself two more times only to get no response, cursing as she pressed her foot further into the accelerator. Swinging around a turn, she gasped as a portal opened up several yards in front of her, slamming on the breaks to avoid hitting the woman who stepped out onto the street.