ShadowChief745
it's really an amazing one .. the story is really good ...I request the author not to abandon it and make it complete......
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For the length of the chapters the description of the status and skills and so on are waaaay to long. Dude no one can keep that stuff in their mind when reading and also it doesnt even matter. I really like the Kingdom building aspect but again the first fight scene was way to long. Its fine if you can write 1000-2000 chapters but if it goes on like this you will geh nowhere.
it was a good read soo far. imma add it to my library and stock up the chapters ??
did the author drop this book or is he planning to mass release
it's good that this writer makeing this type ofi like this
I can't read more of this. The grammar is god-awful, and it does NOT get fixed later on. Decent premise, terrible translation. I can feel my braincells die reading this.
Nice , good story , keep up the good work
"No, I didn't kill him, he killed himself and made him look like I killed him."
"This Master one more bottle."
" Conqueror haki is all about will power. If I can integrate this strong intent to cut through anything in my will, will my conqueror becomes a sharp weapon instead of suppression? If I can do this then when I release my conqueror haki, will my opponent feel like his body has been cut apart instead of suppression? Then, if I reached the level of Shanks where I can do physical damage with my haki, will I be able to cut people by just releasing my will?
"Things might go wrong, but there are also chances that things will change for the better."
