The grammar is pure cancer.
Illegible.
Half words are left and stuck together.
Example:
He finished. After...
Is written as:
He finishfter.
Not to mention the author uses no pronouns.
Literally uses the mc's name 9/10 sentence.
Example:
Yassine looked in horor. He thought this was a spirit. What should he do?
Is written as:
Yassine looked in horror. Yassine thought this was a spirit. What should Yassine do?
For everything. Everything.
Does it get better? Its pure brain damage.
Most novel go with OP mc in action/adventure genre but romance is hard to find.
How I love this novel!!!❤❤❤❤
Ah I see, bummer. It ruins the story so I sadly decided to drop it.
Not even half way thru the prologue but this looks fun
I would really like to understand why had the author had choose to let everybody know the Mc was from another world
The composition of this novel was done carelessly. It's lifeless and was translated poorly. shouldn't writers address from the heart.. A story must be full of emotions specially romance.
Just read the comments and was about to not read when I read the stars, it’s a 4.3 so at least try it if you are debating reading this.
Привет бро пока нет времени прочитать твой роман НО когда появится время я обязательно прочитаю и оставлю отзыв на эту работу. А пока поставлю 5 звёзд и добавлю в библиотеку (надеюсь когда появится время глав будет побольше [img=recommend]
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The authors point of view~
love this book