Jion47
I really liked the story and the characters journey, It is one of my fav webnovels. I was kinda saddened with the bittersweet ending but it was great nonetheless. Thank you author for writing such an enjoyable webnovel.
EZ 5 stars for the title alone.Bonk is justice. Bonk is life.No Horni. Slay all Thots.Also, flat is justice. Don't you dare disrespect the waifus.
Awesome action scenes, great dialogue. Absolutely hilarious story. I loved reading this, it is fast paced, and action packed. I enjoyed the author's use of humor, and was surprised by how detailed the scenes were.I full heartedly reccomend reading this if you like fantasy/action or dark humor. (For some reason my phone wanted to change humor to humour everytime I tried to type it up... ? Just another reason no one should use spellcheck for the final edit ?)
Can't give myself full on some criteria as i think that i'm lacking. For those think my story not good then feel free to not read it.
I don't usually like harem stories but this is one of the best reads I had. A pity it's been dropped but still thank you for giving us the experience of reading such a great work.
Damn it’s one fantastic novel. The story is actually good and has the potential to reach atleast 500 chapters without losing the topic. Most of the originals have good start but then there is no development there. This one is definitely different and deserves a way better rank than those stupid romance and naruto recreations. Author if you are reading this please don’t give up, you have the potential to be good Webnovel writer and hope you keep continuing your good work.
This is a perfect example of what loss in quality looks like. Not sure if this was edited after MTL but, somehow I pushed through 16 chapters. I can put up with math that doesn't add up. I can look past Chinese nationalism. I can normally even give a story 20 chapters with MTL if the story is good. This is not
I apologize right away, English is not my first language.I agree with the previous comment, up to 500-600 chapters our main character influenced the plot, it was interesting to see how he made plans, how he realized them, how he gained strength. The world order itself was interesting, the conflicts in it and the situations our protagonist found himself in were well described, so they were often difficult, but gave him the opportunity to somehow get out of them, using the intelligence or strength he had acquired earlier. The dynamic with the female characters was interesting, the way our protagonist used them to overcome his trauma of mistrusting others, etc. But somewhere after chapter 600, it's like a different work, I don't see our hero as something that has been building for 500 chapters, now he's a dog running from point A to point B and unable to affect anything. Some plans are just discarded, if they exist at all.It feels like every antagonist got +100 IQ, and our hero got 100.And even the power that he had, it's like it just disappeared, if before our hero could fight some of the strongest characters alone, now to defeat one, he has to gather a whole group, I realize that because of some nuances he is limited in using all his power, but it doesn't suck that much. And starting at chapter 720, the river of shit started. With incomprehensible and unnecessary drama that makes you want to quit reading.To summarize, perhaps the author needed to take a break and think things through better, because everything that is being written now is too confusing. I'm going to put this work aside for now, maybe I'll finish it someday, because right now I have no desire to continue
Seriously updating 60 chapters at once, putting it as premium at the same time, the 3 week without any update ? Won't pay for a novel that doesn't even have a translator, that would just be stupid.
Very good novel, now just waiting for the translation to arrive at the chapter where I stay. Sometimes I want to learn Chinese only to read the chapters before xD.
the story seems good, but it was hard for me to continue after chapter 5, the writing quality isnt good. .
The concept is incredible, having a planet as we know it within the Daitan of a reincarnated cultivator is an innovative and very revolutionary idea.But are you telling me that only Chinese live in that platena ??? what a shit author.Even if we leave that point aside, the protagonist makes an absurd and very idiotic comment."Too bad there aren't more countries to destroy the ones I don't like"It was not exactly like that but he gave himself to explain that ... What a damn idiot you must be to want to destroy a country? Not in my wildest dreams would I have the idea of destroying a country just for fucking fun.Although now thinking about it I would destroy China just for the salvation of the Chinese not racites of those who are ... What a damn year we live.
