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"You're already dressed?" asked Magnler, surprised.
"That gigolo is still alive for this long after insulting Xia Louqing!" Said Mu Chen.
t"How's your family?" Tanong nito.
Her face was polished to the point that one simply couldn't point out a single flaw in it. She had slender and long beautiful legs. Her clothes were orange and revealed a decent amount of her body.
Great story. Love how it unfolds and you really get a good understanding of the characters. As for the updates between chapters, that needs to be improved. Other than that....... I love the story. Keep up the good work.
Considering that she couldn't just carry off her sister right this instant, this was the best thing she could do to prevent Aurum from catching a cold.
"Thanks for the fun Tora. I think that will be enough for now, let's leave some fun for Kyouka."
I get why you are stopping, and i love that rather than just spamming crappy chapters you actually worked to make it better, could we actually get a rough time on when you plan to restart chapters?
'' To sing, or to... '' Suddenly, I saw him breathtaking while looking at me.
"*faking a sob* I can't do anything without you brother!"
Echidna : "Does it truly matter? As a matter of fact, I know that she's a Gluttony victim, and I know that by forging a contract together, that you'll be able to rescue her from her pitiful demise. Do you really want her to be like that forever? Don't you want the two Demon sisters to be together again?"