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It's simply incredible, I can't stop reading!! only when finished.
I have only read the first chapter of this book and it is making sense. I like the way the author made a twist in the first chapter when he was ready to compensate her and not just being that rude, spoilt rich kid. I love this book maybe because it is a Chinese novel cause I love reading Chinese novel. ❤️
Sigh... Let me do it since no one gave the proper review yet –1. Mc is a transmigrated one and always thinks or should I say plan properly before acting.2. Story is a harem one, alright? I love harem... (No beta here). 3. Guy has a system that rewards him with points after he berates or beats the protagonist in any way. Points can be used in the shop. 4. Let's say the world-building is average but it's manageable. 5. You have to imagine all the character's features by yourself since it's a Chinese one. 6. So? Mc r*p*s protagonists until they are not protected by the world's will and then killed them. You got what I mean? 7. Mc gets overpowered after he defeats the first prot.8. Mc is a scheming one and you may find it boring simply because everything goes according to his plan so... Yeah f..* me.9. Chapters are free so read them as quickly as possible since it's free? Yeah the free thing is always good for me, lolFor AUTHOR,Author bro, thank you for such a Novel ?
I wouldn't say it's great, but it's certainly not a bad read. There hasn't really been a situation that gives adversity to the mc. plot armor is strong, but it isn't unpleasant. The world background is ok. Not much is truly known yet about his home planet, rather than a brief description. Most world building is in the foreign world battlefield. It has potential like a novel I read in the past where the mc was able to build an empire in another world before his own world.merged with said world.
ngl, it's pretty good. and also the chapter comes out faster.keep up the good work bruh.love the story.and.. yeet, (☞ ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)☞ here's a thumbs up.
This is a review of the first four chapters. In this story, the main character takes a detour on the way home from school and ends up in a supernatural world. He then desperately tries to escape from this supernatural world, but he keeps being pulled back. The plot is scary, but the numerous run-on sentences and other grammatical mistakes dull the shock.
So intriguing and a must read!♥️The serenity will make you want to read more. Should be added to one's library and be read more often at leisure times.
this is a real review, no I don't know the author and just trying to hype things up. this is an actually great story it's non of that generic Chinese bs basic dumb Mc and background character stuff. this is one that is well written and unique. this is my first time giving a review so as one reader to another, it's pretty good?.
5 stars, and for one reason only. The cover. I'm not sure if the Author knows this, but the character on the cover's name is Skadi, or to be more precise, Skadi Alter. She's from a game called Arknights, and is a very strong individual, who is also part of the Abyssal Hunters. The Abyssal Hunters in Arknights fight against all kinds of eldritch horrors that threaten humanity, so it seems like a fitting cover for the author's book. (Yes I am a Skadi simp)
hope this gets picked it's fekin goot my friendlings
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As someone who may want to become a writer in the future. This novel portrays the difficulties of being a writer, and how to overcome them. It has real "expectations vs reality" examples, and several parts of the story relate to your very soul. I am thankful for stumbling upon this and hope to remember some of the great tips, and tricks discussed here!
