REVIEWNarration: Decent and immersiveWorldbuilding: Vast and detailedCharacter development: Nice and steadyCharacter design: OutstandingDialogues: Realistic and LifelikePacing: Not fast nor too slowWriting quality: MagnificentExecution of the Genre: Good pitchStory potential: HighUpdating Stability: SteadyMESSAGEI am deeply happy that the author joined spirity. As it has the potential to win! With more exposure, this will become great and even reach a million views! Or anime adaptation even a movie! Kudos on your work and See you in December (if you know what I mean) ?ADVICENone, the author was a better writer compared to me..... kudos!
Guys this is absolutely bull****!!!!!!!!!!!! My senior brother is too steady will disappear ? what a waste.!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
This is arguably the best smut novel on the entire platform. The charcters, the scenes, the story everything is well thought. The R-18 chapters are balanced and honestly this novel deserves more credit. Good work author-sama.
raw plz?
My only complaint is the MC's almost dismissive attitude or lack of genuine respect towards his disciple. Xu Yan works diligently dedicating himself to Martial Arts cultivation so wholeheartedly, how could MC not feel guilty of bleeding him dry?? ? I feel bad for Xu Yan for having him as a master
One of the best idol novel I have read for now. The only issua I have with it is that the man lead have no hurdle or obstacles. It’s a way too easy road to success for him
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the best one this trial read, it's hilarious i was laughing the whole time while reading this. he has the curse that reverse the effect of everything he do to himself, and it leads to some of the most hilarious scenes in the novel, the jokes are funny and the talk between characters is simply pure comedy with some misunderstanding here and there really adds to the flavor. overall it's a novel i would like to be chosen to be translated.
The MC is a guy who inherited and spent it all and died. The fact that the author thinks that this type of character will attract empathy is insanity. The vast majority of the population wants the useless heirs to die even faster.
OMG! ??? THIS AMAZING! The crime fighting romantic duo, dead parents avenger metal dude, corrupt politicians and police force, nice power scaling and PERFECT transitions of scene as well as the EUPHORIC description of (fight and flirt) scenes. My two fav scenes were the fight club battle (SO GOOD! ??) and the when llara teased lover boy into making him go back on his promise about no *** (I started blushing) Llara is best girl without a doubt!!???? Author-sama congrats on 100k viewers keep up the AMAZINGLY GREAT work (I'm on chap 13 btw? I'm loving so much) To anyone who is reading this review.... PLEASE!! Give this a read or at least at it to collections. ??? If it helps. you can use this app's audio feature to listen to the story while you do something else and still enjoy how great this novel is ?????
I like the story don't stop. I like the story don't stop. I like the story don't stop. I like the story don't stop. I like the story don't stop.
HAHAHA author isa ka pa lang Pilipino ha, chat mo naman fb mo. I'm going to invest to you. Gumawa ka lang ng isang high level fantasy katulad na ang mga kapangyarihan ay mas beyond sa multiverse at infonte ang kakakayahan ng mc.