oh f*ck its back yoooo
No wonder the name Erich pops out of random chapters near the endIt's the name of the protag in author's new novel
I'm grateful for the translation, but really, why make the translation such a mess? Putting a note while the story is still ongoing without a warning, even changing the style that I even wonder sometimes if I tapped on the wrong novel. It's confusing, sometimes normal, sometimes it's informal, it's like messing with the story for fun.
Trailblazer? Honkai: Star rail welcomes you to the Astral Express ?
Its typical of chinese novels.....its either..daddy/ grandfather/ ancestor?. These are common terms used to describe mc as higher than a certain young master......usually goes as" call me your ancestor" or " this daddy/your grandfather"? and in some novels it can be a source of conflict to move on the plot usually coupled with the alchemy/auction house/ restaurant scene.You'll get used to it with time and experience? as it can be infuriating.
Nice story heart wrenching. However author have not been updating it for a long time.
the story is good overall, if you want something classic I highly recommend it. the author put a lot of time into this book, and it's clear. Just needs more substance in the world building department.
10/10 will continue to read, and good luck to the author.
One of the strongest points is the dynamic pacing, which keeps the reader engaged with rapidly advancing events and surprising revelations about Wu Zheng's past. Additionally, the structure of the cultivation system and the different power levels are well-detailed, making it easy to immerse oneself in this universe.
As an area for improvement, it would be beneficial to delve deeper into some key moments of the protagonist's emotional development, so that the reader can better connect with his internal motivations. Also, refining some grammatical and stylistic details could help improve the flow of the narrative, further enriching the reader's experience. It has great potential!
I'm really enjoying this novel so far! It's got a fresh and unique feel compared to most web novels out there. The power system is new and pretty captivating, and the author does a great job building up a mysterious vibe. It's also really well-written, which adds to the overall experience. Since the story is just starting, I’m excited to see how the main character develops, especially since he's still figuring things out like anyone would when thrown into a new world. I can't wait to see how all the mysteries unfold, how the MC uncovers the truth behind the 'Veil,' and the reason he was thrust into this new world.
That said, if you're not into mysterious plots or aren't patient enough to let things unfold, you might find it a bit slow. But honestly, it's still in its early phase, so I'd say give it a chance!
The story is good, it starts off a bit slow but around chapter 10 it starts to kick it up. The reason I say writing is low, is the author needs to use spell check or proof read the work. I’m 48 chapters in and there is so many spelling/grammar issues that takes me a second to decipher their intentions. They also have several areas where they forget what was mention in last chapter or even at beginning of current chapter making contradictory statements, for example they mention the MC was unconscious for nearly 24 hours and half a chapter later that 24 hours has been changed to an hour.
All in all it’s a good read, just need to take some time and decipher the author’s intentions for the story. Hopefully this will be seen by author and they can adjust some in the future as it is a great story so far and I want to see it improve and continue.
why didn't the author tell us how Gerald found out about his parents you just go to three years later
My gosh comments on correcting grammar! Why don’t you people who’s very good in English write a book I don’t think you’ll ever come up this good at writing