Coming into this, you were probably baited by the title. DO NOT LET IT MISLEAD YOU! This story is masterfully crafted with intricate plotlines, characters, and world-building. Yes, harem elements exist, but that is not the only thing it has to offer!
All the characters are wonderfully crafted with delicate details to their backstories, and they all make logical decisions. Not once during my reading did I think that any of the characters felt fake in their dialogue or their actions. The main character Jack, is multilayered and deeply connects to the narrative, creating a powerful driving force for the entire plot.
Also, can we talk about the amazing writing quality?! As an author myself, the way characters converse is completely in line with how I would expect real sea folk to talk to each other! The descriptive language makes this story seem as if it's being narrated like a sea shanty!
The comedy is also very well done! None of it felt cliche and It got me laughing/giggling occasionally without me even thinking about it. None of the jokes flew over my head, the author does a wonderful job of presenting them organically without hurting the agency of the plot. He also interweaves them at the perfect moment so the tone/mood of a scene is not impacted.
Give it a try, I'm sure the first chapter alone will hook you!
Just have a brief read but this story were just too suffocating for me, the typical weak FL that being saved by rich ML. The way every little thing get prolonged just to get the story longer is also a big no for me.
Probably one of the best novels here
This is an absolute amazing book that can be enjoyed more than once. Even with it still being a work in progress I've already reread it 6 times while waiting for new chapters. Sometimes you forget some details or they seem like background noise, but later they are really fundamental to details later and thus makes rereads still very enjoyable as you find such nuggets.
Descriptions are delightful, bringing you along with Hera in her journey experiencing and seeing so many things. A fantastic book by a fantastic author.
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Nice book. You need to go back and check spelling, but other than that, the story is good.
Good so far, i like the mc she's funny and unique. If her system had a face i imagine it would be rolling its eyes 24/7 because of their interactions together lol Looking forward to more!
This tale is not meant for every discerning eye, for its contents bear witness to explicit sensuality, and may be deemed tedious by some. Therefore, I urge you, dear reader, to exercise your discretion, and depart if such themes offend your sensibilities. I make no demand on you to peruse my humble effort at storytelling. I implore you only to proceed if you are of the age of majority, for the content that follows is intended solely for those who have attained the age of eighteen or beyond.
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I’ve been reading this novel none stop since I came across it. I really like how the FL and ML trust each other when others try to separate and don’t drag along misunderstandings like othet novels. It has an interesting storyline and I highly recommend this novel!!!
Really an awesome story, didn't expected much when starting but was pleasantly surprised by the plot and World background, the story seems promising