Overall an interesting story with some intriguing ideas but very poorly executed, aside from massive time skips, there is barely any interaction between characters, 0 development, world building completely tossed out the window, in 60+ chapters not more than 10 sentences have been spoken between characters, there is no use of the system, no explanation about skills, no quests, it doesn't even feel like a game world(even if it looks like later it will merge with the real world) everything seems super rushed and for the love of god, the chapters are super short too. I enjoy the story somewhat as i find the plot interesting but thats all, an interesting plot and a huge potential wasted.
I am wondering why this is not higher up in the rankings. I enjoy this as much as I enjoy Ancient Godly Monarch, both having awesome lead characters and so highly imaginative authors that conjure fantastic battles they go through. The action is so engrossing.
Awesome story and i'm really looking forward to how it developes. Just a few things that i think would make it a better experience if fixed. 1- there are too many question marks in places they shouldnt be. A character would be making a statement and then there would be a question mark at the end, which isnt a big issue but can be irritating at times. 2- there are too many fully capatilised words or sentences. I know that its for emphasising a point but its a little much. Also all the "everyone shouted "WHHAATTT" " gets old. It just doesnt make sense and makes me feel like im watching a cartoon. 2- generally the spelling isnt that bad but there are a few words that are mispelled regularly for example the word "read" is always spelled as "red". Its ok if its once or twice but this has been the same since the start of the novel untill the current chapter im up to (100s). For spelling and grammar there are many free programs like grammarly that can help you. Anyway sorry if it seemed like a rant but im just trying to help you out and make the novel a better experience. Great job on the story and best of luck
MORE CHAPTER WE NEED MORE CHAPTER UR GONNA GIVE US MORE CHAPTER U WILL GIVE US MORE CHAPTERS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
The book is overall good. Very good if i may add but the update stability is eating me from inside out. Also spoiler ahead..........There are some real narcissistic characters. I have seen 2 most obnoxious one. One is a political fiancé and another is his disciple who is a "God-King".The fiancé kind of later gets less obnoxious but still obnoxious. The disciple is getting some development.BUT The most despicable thing in this novel/book is that,THE MC/PROTAGONIST DOESN'T GET ANY FRICKING CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT.I can't express the frustration I have felt with the lack of character development with our character who is the focus of our novel.As much as i like the concept of this novel, if I can't see any character development it will amount to nothing later.Also considering the fact that this is the first novel of our dear author, the writing quality is way beyond i expected. The only 2 lacking thing is the update stability and the lack of character development.Hope Author will take this in a positive way and bring us delight through his arts.
Keep up the good work..........................................................................................................................................................................................
I have to it's going pretty good so far and I hope he will earn some money in the game for his own stability and to give for his friend, you did say he is very loyal. I just wish the name for his character was unique, that's all.
More releases ?? Been here many years, never gonna give you up
Pls pick this novel
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I will give a review. The story is pretty good. it's good to burn time. not too good but not too bad ... 8/10 ....sosjsbsisbsjsizbjxixbxbxizbaiaba
I say this is kinda illogical. if there will be batrayed gods then it is ok to explain why mc got such a op talent. if not i think the gods need to check their brain a little.