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Interesting story about a girl, driven by music and a male model. Great idea to present something different to the reader!
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Good story, but some support from the editor will make it better. Good luck ...️...️
intriguing blurb. The first chapter is fire ......
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Great book!
A very nice book.... Am really loving it... am a Nigerian and a GN writer as well....
Your other book was so good and I can't wait to read this one!!!
So far, I'm really loving it! The engaging interactions, the immersive setting, and the relatively leisurely pace compared to other novels make this a delightful read, offering a glimpse into everyday life. I'm also intrigued by the fascinating supporting characters, and I hope their stories will be further developed in depth.
The standard reincarnation-in-historical-setting tale. It's not bad, but lacks uniqueness. The protagonist, FL, is an adult who reincarnates as a 13-year-old, but behaves childishly for her age. Her modern knowledge is sporadically utilized, making her transmigration seem unnecessary, mainly to justify her "contemporary" traits and vague future insights. She's intelligent but not exceptional, with occasional humorous moments and assertiveness, resulting in entertaining confrontations. However, her actions appear lenient given the era. FL's character development is minimal.
The male lead (ML) pretends to be mentally challenged for ten years, with a significant plot twist when he reveals his true abilities. Though it has consequences, the revelation isn't overly impactful due to FL's awareness and ML's eventual证明。 He is devoted to FL.
Their relationship starts as a playful bickering couple, with ML showing affection towards FL, who is initially unaware. They eventually become intimate after marriage, but their development could have been more substantial. The story's title may mislead, as FL isn't ML's fiancée until near the end, despite initial expectations.
Villains are one-dimensional, and supporting characters are underdeveloped. Some characters remain resentful because of FL's past behavior as a 3-year-old, but they are amazed by her transformation later. The story is relatively mild on conflict compared to others in its genre, and FL doesn't engage in elaborate schemes or seek revenge.
While the overarching plot could be intriguing, the main antagonist's lack of intelligence slows down the narrative. I found myself skimming parts. Overall, it's a decent read if you're looking for something light and uneventful.
Advice for new readers: Consider skipping or skimming the first arc, as it can be frustrating. The story improves significantly afterward. The main character, Ning Shu, initially undergoes a challenging introduction and experiences a series of events in her first world, including bullying, romance complications, and discovering a secret character, Psycho, who turns out to be a criminal and mad scientist.
In Arc 1, Ning Shu's primary objective is to thwart her rival, the FL (a transmigrated girl), and gain revenge. The arc involves lots of struggles, self-defense training, and unexpected encounters with characters. However, the plot thickens when Ning Shu forms an unlikely alliance with Psycho to protect herself.
While Arc 1 contains valuable background information, it might not be the most enjoyable part for new readers. If you decide to proceed, expect the tone and character dynamics to improve in subsequent arcs, with the protagonist becoming stronger and facing less annoying NPCs. Some plot points, like the doctor-related confusion, might be a source of humor or character development.
To sum up, while Arc 1 can be skipped without major loss, the novel improves as it progresses, and the author does address the annoying characters later on. Give the story a chance after Arc 1 if you're interested in the protagonist's growth and the more engaging storylines that lie ahead.
