Wow, So good so far. I never expected you to focus more on kali's character development. I hope you write about kalki's story too. I hope you continue writing this series. I love Hinduism concepts story.
A good novel, although it has some plot holes and some mistakes it is overall a noice novel. I guess i am a bit bias cause it is a novel on ancient Bharat
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Overall I like the story and think it's a fun read but, I really can't get past the MC being so ruthless for no real reason. (Author gives a reason but honestly it's super weak in my eyes)
Wait. I’m I allowed to review my own story? I’m already writing one so too late now! Paramnesia is a story I started working on about a year and a half ago. Back then, I originally planned to draw a comic for this story. Which is why the first few chapters were kinda off, I had a bit of trouble turning a comic into a novel. Btw, if you look closely at the cover you’ll see the words ‘pathway to another world’ under the title, that’s because that was the original name of this story and that cover was from a long time ago so it still had that title. If anyone is curious, here’s the dictionary definition of Paramnesia. par·am·ne·sia ˌperamˈnēZH(ē)noun PSYCHIATRYa condition or phenomenon involving distorted memory or confusions of fact and fantasy, such as confabulation or déjà vu.I like using names that have meanings so if you want to know mean about the characters personalities you could search up their names. The only characters who are named after real people are the male and female main characters. Wow! This was probably longer than my chapters! Thanks for reading!
I love the flow and development of this book. the characters are so entertaining and keeps me wanting to read more. the book is edgy and thrilling!
The story is interesting. Great read, really enjoyed reading it so far. I recommend it to anyone.
Title: Heavenly Lord Asura(修罗天尊)Status: Completed(2296 chapters) Summary(perhaps spoiler):Classic cultivation story where the MC is 'destined to be unordinary'. The setting this time seems to be related to his missing parents. There also seems to be some prophetic abilities involved. The writing quality is not bad and you'll probably like the story if your a fan of standard cultivation stories.
I've just started reading this book and I can see so much determination.Good luck author,I love your style of narration,easy and understand. well detailed too.❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️?
Make this world where the MC was reborn a world where entertainment is not as good as ours (like in IRAS) this way you can use our worl books, movies, novels, poem, music, programs and etc as the MC original works.
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Great writing skills! You have a great flow and ngl your story writing skills feels enigmatic and SO SO intriguing that it's almost impossible to stop reading. Definitely a page turner. I was intrigued by your short stories and I really love your themes and ideas for them. Keep up the good work!