I know this story is still early on, but absolutely amazing so far. I’m looking forward to more from this author. Definitely a hidden gem and Thanks for the great story
Ehhhh... The synopsis already makes me wanna not read this. Why? Because he said 'First' wife, meaning, that there will probably be a second, a third, and maybe even more. At this point, I have just read too many harem novels, to the point where I'd even avoid reading a novel just because it has harem in it. But there are some harem novels I generally don't have any problems with. But that's because the plot doesn't revolve around the mc's harem where the mc will have to go save them every time they get into trouble nor will the mc just forget about them and only remember them when they need to get saved. Instead, the harem added in by the author is just something to keep the readers interested in the story and doesn't depend on the mc 99% of the time. And from the mc's goals stated in the synopsis, it does seem like one of those novels with beautiful CEO's, a policewoman, a super famous movie star, and maybe even a underaged teenage girl(a loli). But I guess I'll end it here and actually read the story first.
This is a very interesting, hilarious and awesome novel with a tooo OP mc. It's very fulfilling. I can guarantee you all that throughout the reading process you will be filled with joy. So all my fellow readers please give it a try. It's only lacking in exposure so whoever liked this I request you to recommend this novel to your friends.
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Is it fun to just steal a story and take it as your own?If you are not crative enough to write your own story who cares,but to steal someone elses work for undeserved fame is just disgusting to the extreme!
You are making story way worse by trying so hard.There is a good reason for so many similar novels to exist, because it works! Your starting template is similar to 'global lord' types, yet instead of following the fast paced formula, you write an extremely slow paced progression, which doesn't fit this sub-genre at all.Literally whenever ANYTHING happens, MC starts thinking about it for ungodly amount og paragraphs. Then he says something like "wait this is not important now
Nice!! keep goin thor.. gamer desa here support any Indonesian people who want to be novelis in webnovel. Wish the best for all Indonesian here.
I can actually see this book becoming so big it becomes featured. It's that good. I didn't really have anything to complain about. There were times I got confused but I just reread and it made sense. Maybe it was just me? It's really different, maybe a little to different for some. I think gamers would love it though. So far the story is progressing nicely. Anyway great book. ❤️
This is your typical below-average [low-quality] story that Webnovel adores to spam us with. The protagonist is your typical xianxia hero, who continuously convinces himself that he must be more ruthless but apart from a few moments of so-called ruthlessness remains a naive do-gooder. It's a low effort translation, nothing innovative, new or interesting. What's more, the amount of reviews for this novel seem to be fluctuating. The number of reviews will at times just...disappear. Suspicious.
Pro'sYou can see the writing quality improving as the story continuesMC can cultivate outside of the systemCon's I noticed many inconsistencies in the story The story is in desperate need of more world developmentThe system is an almost a non-existent part of the storyCertain story points that are added for plot are illogicalQing Yi is a bully and seems completely ungrateful to her master-The story had great potential yet delivered an average story, however the writing has shown vast improvements as the story progresses. I still don't completely understand the reasoning behind Qing Yi having a complete personality change into the most annoying and hated character (by readers) in the story, but it is too late to change after the fact. Hopefully, she jumps ship to the other alchemist, as it would be congruent with her current personality. Overall, I look forward to the next story by the Author, as with their rate of improvement, it will likely be an exceptional work.
One of the most important criteria for a novel is the personality of the mc, he can be weak or strong as long as he is intelligent, mature and cold hearted when needed it’s Okay for me.I hate when we have a protagonist that have lived for thousands of years and act like a 15 years old kid; so I can tell you that this one of the best mc from 100+ that I have read, you can also add WAO.