I don’t think I ever written a review for all the novel that I have read. Commented on them, gave my criticism, but never a review. The reviews here don’t do this novel any justice. This is one of the worst novels I have ever read. Sometimes some MC are ridiclously overpowered but this MC, it’s just plot armor. The background for this story, horrendous. The description - terrible. The characters of Earth - idiots. There are some novels where the background story is made pretty late and things will somehow make sense but this one is just ridicolous and just lazy writing. The only good thing is the grammar is actually ok. That’s it. Don’t waste your time with this novel. Author’s summary was ok but this book is just dumb.
The premise is interesting and you can write the antagonist character well, my mate. it made me want to support the main character in order to beat them.Keep it up! ???
This novel is stupid. Everything seems more Asian than American even though it's based in America. Lots of inconsistencies. The ending was too abrupt. it just ended with "He got a First class merit but no one knew because it was confidential." ??? what kind of ending was that? they just rounded up an entire arc in TWO paragraphs and said "ya we done with this story".???? Problems with this story are listed here.1) Asian culture in an American setting. eg. Calling people aunts and uncles and also calling others brother or sister (Americans just call people-besides parents and grandparents- by their names regardless of age) Also, terms like Qi etc were used often.2) Repetition 3) There's no flow. No connection between different arcs.4) the balance of gaining points or rewards is tilted. MC did nothing besides reading and all reading materials was provided on a silver platter (including confidential info)5) Everyone just trusted him without hesitation for no actual reason. He just said "Believe me." and they'd just do. 5) The anti gravity arc was simply just cut out. the majority of the book was of him "reaching for the stars". Instead of working on it after making a whole research laboratory, he just did some side quests and the book ended.6) What about Atlantis??? there was a whole civilization dying there and you just left for the side quests. Was making a submarine so important? Just to showoff to the Russians? 7) MC has no remorse. He just bombed a whole area in Mexico. 8) Lots of white supremacy and unfounded nationalism. After all that happened IRL to America, (BLM, police aggression, etc) this whole book just triggered me. 9) Terrible writing and grammar. Why so many exclamation marks?10) I don't even know what the MC looks like. I read the entire book and no mention of his eye or hair colour.11) Time periods was unrealistic. it takes time to draft up something whether digitally or by hand (at least a week or more) yet he just finished building a whole new working submarine in 2 weeks and also got it tested and all. (bro. who is the one designing and labelling the stuff? -_-) 12) He just forgets people he made promises to. What happened to that guy who found his talent? His friends? Mavis or whatever her name was? what about the researchers in the labs? Those professors he poached? I'm done writing .
bro its good.??i thought cultivation genre was finished but boy was i wrong. i thought cultivation was repetitive, cliche and harem,etc..and as i was bored i tried it with no hope but boy was i wrong try it u will not regret it
I'm wondering why you are reading the comments still and not reading the story already. If you stopped long enough to read this, you must be trying to talk yourself out of reading this and go to sleep like a normal person. WHY? Aren't you a person of culture? Sleep is for the weak. Read until you die. Then become a ghost reader.
first 10 ch looks good after then it getting boring , main character remain same type there is not so development side character dont have much characterstics , throughtout reading chp you will not feel any attachment or excitment whatever event happening
This is a comedy that has some smiles among the endless tries. Unfortunately the MC is a dumba**, the story is tiresome, the comedy is not really that fun, etc. Can be readable for a little while, but it should be difficult to read far into this novel.
Found it to be average at best. Tge MC is boring with no real development of world, character, and story. While I do understand that it's only the beginning and may just take awhile to Rev up as a trial read it's all I can go off of.
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I looked for something exactly like this and was so happy that you wrote this. This is a great novel, thank you author.
I've read up to 100, and so far I've been enjoying it. This story feels like a slow burn, moving the story forward wise. Maybe too convenient getting super rare demon summon, but I'm okay with that. Dunno if giving him crazy super dungeon to fight so early is the way to go, but we'll see how it progresses.
The story is over all nice and my favourite character is i guess you know but i want to told you separately that it's ~~~~larry oh my he is so cool pleased to write and i want more chapters