Loved seeing a unique take on the pre-apocalyptic stage! I appreciate the time the author took to develop this stage.The characters had depth and the foreshadowing was great!I’d really love to read more! ?
I really enjoy your work! I'd love to stay connected and keep up with your latest creations. Do you have any social media or email? It would be great to be in touch~
Good shit man, I’ll let it stack more chapters and come back.It’s a nice change of pace instead of the usual bullshit you see on here.
Great work for an upcoming writer.I love the setup and plot but I think the story might be moving a bit too fast ?
not bad, though I can't say for sure if it's really reached the end or not at chapter 8.the story feels more like an overview of what happens, though in a few points, it gives a lot more detail. if each 'scene' was a chapter themselves, this story would easily get up to 98 chapters, at least. though I can't really say if the author would choose to do that.though there are also a few points where it was difficult to really understand what was going on, as the overview aspect kind of hindered that, plus sometimes the backstory of the situation is explained after. yet, overall, I think it went pretty well.
It's been over a year now, figured I might as well do the obligatory five-star author review.Honestly don't know what to put here other than I hope you like dark fantasy. To be more specific this is a casual fantasy world on the brink of entering its industrial revolution era with some dark themes and moments being its main driving force for the story.The first two volumes follow Lucilla's (Also known as Ruby) origins, showing us where she starts before transforming into the villain that the world told her she was. All so she can protect those she holds dear.I guess I should change the synopses since at the time of writing this that is a little out of date.Bye see you later!
Read till 55 chapters.Better than 90% same genre WNs.InterestingIt still lacks some thingsLike Fast paced , Fewtimes dialogue breaks immersion and character depths are lacking but good enough.Then world building and power scaling are okayish.I like your Villainess novel more.I would recommend you Young Master's POV.In that novel Character interaction, depths and power scaling are top tier with decent world building and good pacing depending on situation.Well good work.
The update is slow but I love the story line.
Great storyline? love the pace and character development too?
Mahn!!? I'm starting to like Ruthie and Samara their just so funny ???
Great TL, long live ?? thanks for the update
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