Great characters and progression. easy to read, I like the switch from multiple male love interests to yuri love interests while the mc is shooting down the originals.
Author hás a fetish for having bis women being molested, kidnapped, forced plot and lost of drama! Loss of potential ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
This is brandon gould I am sorry that it took me a while to respond to this review swap but here is my review
Of the chapters that I have read I think that this is a interesting book with a unique concept.
The world is detailed enough to where I can get a genreal sense of what it looks like.
besides a few minor puncion errors the story is still writtin well enough to where you can understand what is going on and the story is well paced
I will be sure to read more to see what happens next
It’s fun, but its 100% plot armor. I liked it but I can’t see myself reading more then 50 chapters of this book.................................
This book is amazing, keep going! Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?
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an average quality CN webnovel, brought down by bad quality machine translation, "translator" just pump out as many chapters as they can and didn't bother to edit, and correct any mistake. Don't bother to pay or vote for this novel just read free machine translated one.
So far read the first chapter and find it quite interesting. The characters' names are cool and the way the author designs them is fabulous. World development is something it makes you lost in the story.....Cheer up author .....its a good read
1. there is no world buildingno idea what kind of world it is, planet? plane? what are the countries? how their world got the dungeons and wild monsters.2. No idea how they got their powers originally. How the level system works. if it is just gaining power and leveling like in a game it's stupid3. there are no strength, agility, stamina stats.. which means basically mc has infinite stamina which is ridiculous4 just the idea that they have game like skills and level up by killing without anything like energy gathering or physical training or skill training is stupid. too much is so wrong.. this is like a story in a game. like imagine you play a game in ps5 and this story is the story of the game
other than the update stability and few minor grammatical errors, everything is fine. give it a try
the vocabulary and punctuation is good and doesn't give me an aneurysm everytime I read a sentence, unlike the usual wuxia novels