NoYuri
gonna rate it 4.0 stars for now.. the translation still needs some work, but it's getting better. like with the names and how who is actually talking kinda confuses the reader. but overall keep up the good work ?.
Wtf. Peak action, peak characters, peak writing, how is this not more popular.
♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡ i like if you all,and i hope you like it
are u gonna add romance
Frankly, your idea is genius. Any training, young master. Any I don’t know, the stupid Chinese. If you are not spoiled, what will you do? You live for 100 years and you could die at any moment. What a stupid story. I inherit the family business and I think I am poor.
Such a good read?Keep updating new chapters, Author
I would probably read this if I trusted the author to not drop it.
I am reviewing this book only for the FP
I’ve read to chapter 44. So far the story is pleasant and I can see how the plot will develop. The FL is a Mary Sue who has all these skill despite being only 18. The ML is heads over heels for her very early on.It does seem to be another MTL novel. I wish the uploader would do a quick review before uploading. There are careless mistakes that can’t get pretty annoying. So I like the story, but the spelling and punctuation mistakes are so numerous that I would not spend coins on it.
The first arc is focused more on mystery with lack of horror. But the story is super fun and has huge potential. Gonna read it for later.The only complain for now I have is the grammar, which can be fixed later on.
What an amazing story!!?The plot is maintained so well?i am looking forward to your next chapters and the twist and turns?Best of luck author??
Wuji’s journey is engaging, though the pacing sometimes drags, and certain explanations can be dense.------------- Overall, an engaging read.
