Hey. I just wanted to say you’re doing a fantastic job at writing this novel. I hope you carry on and not burn out especially now around the 500-600 chapter you did an amazing job at wiring the plot. Good job author.
Good story don't know why this didn't get pick when there are a lot of trash novels out there but all well good read though...................................
hmmmmm... a finger can kill the Heavenly Overlord.... the author's name is Heavenly Overlord, i think i've found the secret meaning of the synopsis this story is about how the author writes a book to kill himself
interesting.
This is one of the best if not the greatest novel for all the Men of culture, This author has good grasp with his words and does great job describing things, and I don't even want talk about how this author guy thinks of such impeccable bull **** to get his way around girls, I mean "trouser snake" your are the one true genius of cultural practices, I'm looking forward to more and just for change possess a chick and have her grow penis with some sort of skill he gets, it'll be more easier to get other girls and it'll be like having a yaoi in the story, just suggestions man, I mean who doesn't like lesbian ****
The first novel I dropped before at least reaching chapter 50...? Too much confusion, too much inconsistency, too much b*llsh*t. And to top it off, bad writing style, bad storytelling, no worldbuilding, hardly any characterbuilding and so on and so forth... Not worth reading and seeing as the novel goes premium after some dozen chapters is really undeserved... ?
All I can say is that there is a new cliche at every turn> I honestly expected something new and fresh but there are young masters, selling charms, and sparing enemies left and right.All the characters are one-dimensional, even the mc himself.And when I say cliche, I meant this book has the most cliches I have seen in every novel I have ever read, which is a lot. I think the only reason this book doesn't have negative reviews is because nobody bothered to read it, or they were deleted.
It is a delightful novel. This is for people who want to be set back and relax watch how Patrick destroys everyone, but I'll say that the updates on this Are little slow so bear with it
I am at a crossroad here.......I want to give author 5 stars cause his writing, structure and all that **** is GOLD, Large no of chps DOPE........BUT see, 2 things I just read in this book make me think its trash.they are1- MC defends some slutty chick that tried get some dude beat up by her BF [who she cheated on] cause that dude was ugly, but then gets almost punched by her BF who found out she was cheating.....MC defends her .2-Read CHP 9.....relationships are forced as ****......like its shallow, not new author level ****......just shallow..so yah'
I liked this story, it was a smooth read and although there were ups and downs in the story I never felt that I should just stop reading or anything so, the ending wasn't rushed and it also leaves scope for a follow through sequel of the story if the writer wishes to write it. I would definitely recommend this to readers who are here to relax, enjoy and just enjoy the pace of the story.
Having spent quite a bit of SS, I must admit that it was extremely disappointing reading. I do not recommend read paid chapters anyone.A promising beginning, but then literally everything becomes worse with each chapter - the characters do not develop, the relationship between them ends immediately after the completion of their story, which is repeated arc after arc. At some points, the author demonstrates tremendous ignorance of the issues of which he writes. I constantly found myself thinking that whole paragraphs were added only to increase the words count. By the end of the story, there are so many defects that it is already impossible to ignore them. Everything turns into some kind of absurd farce.
Complimentary first review from the Author:The story is set in a world where magic exists, and each Magical Element has a Holy Church, with the Holy Church of Light being the most influential and strongest. The only element which doesn't have a Sacred Church is the Element of Darkness as it was destroyed, being thought to be the work of the Devil. Since then, all Dark Mages were hunted by the world and killed whenever discovered.In this world, Gabriel wakes up with the Holy Element of Light, but due to circumstances, he wakes up with a second Element, Darkness which brings him at an unexpected crossroads. The story will be an epic filled with mystery, adventure and actions.Please give it a try.