It has a good start, Writing isn’t bad either.
Another victim of "plot preservation
I love how traumatized Meg is. It makes so much sense that her rebirth has so much effect on her. Hope she gets a happy ending ❤️❤️❤️?
Shameless author review here ? thank you to whoever is checking out my book, I love all feedback ✨good or bad✨. Lock in you guys ? it’s going to get steamy
I like the book and the writing. My only complaint was personal preference. The MC honestly is a tad wimpy. It seems like he is literally crying every 2 or 3 chapters. Again this is preference and maybe him being overly emotional is by design. I’m just more adjusted to a tougher MC in these type of stories.
Saw someone drop a review so HERE I AM.You can read that flipin dude (2nd review) to get more indepth but, without spoiling too much for ya, all i say is, THIS IS DARK MHA. like frAll the things that orignal left out is probably going to be in it. . .(dark theme confirmed by author)As for mc (jin) i personally think he is more of a thomas shelby, OP but suffering with his own internal battles and problem.- He is a isekai hitman. (no he is not nerfed, like realisticaly )- There are lot of non canon things (crime and stuff)- Focusing on intresting side characters.-Deku will has his different journey, so we get 2 in 1There are already some signs of what he will cover and it becomes pretty clear with that note in chapter 12 or somewhere near, you can read it, it won't spoil anything.All in all, i think it's one of the best dark- action MHA fanfic WITH THE WORST UPDATE (4-6)---- JUST DO IT, f perfection.Although most chapter are 4-5k too.
A drunk Russian communist warrior.An angry Rogue cursing in Cantonese. An Italian who would sooner shoot people dead with words then with his arrows.An African American pointed his wand around like a gun, then pulled its imaginary trigger.And there's me, the typical Asian guy you will last pick for dodge ball team.This was my first ever VRMMO RPG team.This is the world of [Unlimited Dreams]. Huge thanks to @Creaking_Shadow for making this ridiculously good cover (≧◡≦)
goooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooood
MC with peak hatred for humans✅️MC has hunger for strength and power✅️Character development✅️C'mon man, there's more interesting things can say which will take forever. So do me and you a favor and check the book out.
This is great, while I don't like how he looks or is described physically as for both him and his 'toad' dad as this is fantastic and has really good backstory so far.
bro, It quite good but it too fast-paced and their isn't interaction between mc and his junior sisters as well as master. And their isn't showing how he killed any son of luck.And not every son of luck or daughter are bad ,it like if you hate a human so you want to eradicate the species
Can't believe I am saying this, but I honestly liked the novel. I mostly use webnovel for fanfics, since most novels end up becoming paywalled into oblivion, but this one I actually liked. A good story, no baby-ish or dumb actions by the mc, and characters outside the mc exist... thought only that much for now since only 3 chaps are done. I hope the author keeps up the great work. Imma add this one to my collection... its strange, having an original novel in a library full of fanfics...