Mitsuki7075
I already cultivated a dao of cold-hearted for this kind of story~?????????????????????????????????????
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Need improvement in all aspect...beside explaining the level of cultivation...author should've explain what is yang cultivator/yin cultivator in early part of the story...and dont make the male mc more stunning than female please...dont make it sound like yaoi novel...its disgusting
I read this in one go and ended at chp 20 and saw that it’s to be continued? Almost coughed out blood. This novel is engaging, addictive, interesting, amusing, hilarious... what other word can I describe it’s awesomness with? I love it. The only flaw is that it seems the MC is getting too OP and that kinda dulls things coz I don’t see anything that is challenging him. Oh, never mind, it’s still in the early chapters. I’ll just stick about. ?
It is amazing to think about something like dark energy for cultivation and in the real-world we know nothing about it. The most amazing part of this novel is our earth, it seems we will see lots of fighting between different races in the universe.
story would be so much better if the MC was not fawning over Zhao Ying. I mean. He should be old enough to not be such an idiot. Or at least to not be attracted to short sighted, vapid girls. I mean. She keeps looking down on him, thinks skills or martial arts are better than intelligience/knowledge. Even when he beats other people in combat she looks down on him. She is always following around his enemy, who is arrogant and like to bully and look down on others... I mean. Either she is not as good and kind as she appears to be, or she is to ****** minded to have any real character of her own with which to express opinions that do not line up with Zhuo Fei Yangs. Honestly, at no point in the story does her character come off as attractive or appealing. I cannot see an intelligient individual actively pursuing or even liking someone like that.
a novel that focuses solely on a sport? i had already read a novel that focuses on the mc being an actor and the likes... but this is my first sport novel... seems like fun
I love this story so far. But it's going to lose out to other wuxia and light novels that update twice a day. How hard is it to find a second translator? Expecially when the story's hitting hitting it's peek pretty soon.
good read.iwill refer it to my book club
Really captivating blurb and nice start, keep up the good work! ❣️
A nice story that has a lot of potential
Now i wanna know what happens next
