This is a story leaning a bit on the macho side, battle battle battle everywhere, character development is slow, there is no romance ( none whatsoever), most of the battle techniques of the mc are introduced abruptly ( like there is no training or comprehension session, when he's fighting, at the very least second he erupts with a new technique to blow other people's mind),a few stuffs are exaggerated ( damn, I'm giving way too many negative opinions), take the story with a pinch of salt and hopefully you can enjoy it
Love the world building and Character moments.If you ever publish physically let me know I'd love a copy!!Good to find a novel that doesn't immediately drive home a harem, and make the female characters lose all their individuality and power just to trail after the Male MC.
Hope you are all enjoying my story! I update many chapters a week, thank you all for the support:)
hey I read the story and it is really good and interesting. And author I have a suggestion if you can do it. The suggestion is that can you add brackets for AI like when AI talks can you add brackets like [Add like this ] so it will make it more appealing
Nigerian authors are very few... it's nice to know we're not alone. Nice story bro.
Definitely potential, but let's see where the author is going to take us.by the way, I am the author of this novel. I am here just to post a comment and see if I can find it by search.
I commend the author, he was able to speedrun every single cliche in the book, and in the first five chapters nonetheless.?? Im honestly pretty surprised at how many cliches it had.
The story is easy to read and is detailed when characters or graphic scenes are concerned. You won't be disappointed once reading. ??????????????
Aaaah I got attached to the characters too quickly I can't believe I finished reading it. It was a nice read, it would have been awesome if it was longer but at least the ending was satisfying. The characters are really lovely and likable. Some chapters were funny, some were sad but that was what made everything better, the thoughts and interactions between James and Koz made the story more realistic than I expected it to be. Overall I think this is very well-written, definitely worth a read.
Love this story binged it today and now I’m out of chapters please update it soon can’t wait for the empire arc along with him getting revenge on the alien groups who wiped out his race
*PLEASE READ THIS REVIEW ALL THE WAY THROUGH BEFORE DOING ANYTHING*I absolutely love the idea of this book and it should have been an enthralling story. However, as I read into the book it became more and more apparent that the plot of the story was being made up on the fly and that there was only thought as to that exact moment in the book. The main character was made fairly okay in the beginning but very soon he became like the traditional cardboard cutout of an isekai protagonist bearing no unique qualities and his voice and actions we as though they came right from the authors head making the Main Character fell less like a person and more like a puppet. and the "People" around him were even worse, not only were they used to info dump every few chapters but they orbited around the main character draining the chance that they could have had to have a well fleshed out personality. The plot feels forced and like a match made in heaven, making me feel a little weird because although I am not opposed to it, it makes it harder for me to really place myself in the character position and it breaks the immersion I would normally feel from a book. Now with all my nitpicking out of the way I actually really liked this book. The idea and concept behind the book were phenomenal I was so happy to see someone finally make a book within this category of multi-dimensions, and I must say good sir that this author did a wonderful job with his world-building and how he structured the way everything is supposed to work. I think that this author is not bad at writing but just needs some experience with the wording because info-dumping is okay in any book the only thing is that you need to word it so that it is easier on the reader. The characters need a little more fleshing out and they need to be a little touched up but that can be fixed with time and a little bit of hard work. Overall, I liked this book and to the author. This is a bit of constructive criticism and I hope you take it with a grain of salt as I really liked the concept of your book and I would love it even more if it can reach new heights with this review. I HOPE THAT YOU HAVE A WONDERFUL DAY.
I love this book so much and everyone should read it. The characters are all very interesting and well written with compelling emotions and the story is so fantastically unique.