ColeKincaid
Thanks for the warning, welp I'm gone novel hunting elsewhere
Did the author abandoned the story? It's been 9months.
wow i didnt know this site had todemo skill!!! i downloaded all of its ln's but ill read it on here. its really good fyi. its a good mixture betwean comedy and cooking. dont expect the mc to get strong though.
Top tier providence
Best novel for lowkey mc
Im surprised this still going. . . I stop reading like 700-800 chapters and it been like more than 2+ years now. Those who've read, what is currenting going on? it is still good? and is the story closing to the end yet?
Hello
is the author female?anyway this sure is a stupid story. main idea was ok. but the way the story went with this idea made the entire story a crap story. and as some1 else said the cultivation system is bullshit.so the MC fist learn spacetime laws and next level of cultivation he need to learn time law. and not to mention that it seems the MC needs to be emperor (of china of course) to advance. lol
This is very disorganized one chapter he's fighting the fairy hero and the next he's a baby.They didn't even explain how he dropped the fairy hero level to level 1 from 100 it just happened after a few Paragraphs
The initial premise is rather common for a system novel with the exception of that we know where the system came from. It lands on some twit and we discover immediately how the current story will cove its plot holes. The mc has a rumor that messes with his ability to think properly, nice deflection there. The setting is hidden society type earth with cultivation subbed in for magic but it doesn't excuse all the references. While they are more understandable with this being earth they are neither funny nor relatable. The other problem is the fact that our innkeeper spends little time in his inn. With his world hopping which wasn't really interesting to his escapades on earth which also wasn't interesting. The final nail in the coffin for me was the random realm jump that gets waved away with a "something happened" before we are ill introduced to a bunch of characters we will never care about and a serving that while it has promise is not but ash in the end.
Tldr the author had an idea but needed to go back over and edit it slightly.
Astonishing, very unique concept, I like the way you composed the book!
The characters are well-written and nicely written situations, I must say this book is worth reading ☺️
Best of luck author such a nice job you have done, keep it up.
This is new, like I was surprised when I read the first part, I had to read it again, one wife isn't enough and this mf wants a hundred my head is hurting.
I like this Bleach Fanfic as Its Win Over,Induce,Seduce,Date,Romance,Seggss are quite realistic,I like It.
PLEASE Author-nim Add Bleach Fillers,Movies,Novels,Video Games,Anime,Manga in this Awesome FanFic Author-san.
