It has the potential for sure, keep improving!
Sehr gutes Buch ,bin sehr zufrieden mit der Handlung ?. Kann ich an jeden weiterempfehlen.
A hero story, with romance and adventure. The novel is worthwhile for you to read. You can explore the new world, be friends with dragons, and find out what true happiness is.
starting good .. I'm already hooked ?...
i love this book both the protagonist male and female Are awesome
I love the world building and character development. Its well written and it’s a great story overall. I’m surely adding it on my collection.
Incredible , but can get confusing and the cohesiveness isn’t the best, but it’s a fun story, :)
second review lol ;p (definitely worth the read) i've been reading for a while and i was just happy to see it being contracted. hope this review helps ;> congrats!
not once the character did something that makes sense he endured all those I thought he will become more cold but instead of that he became a virjin Mary also the tags you had put has no meaning to it just say that he is an idiot with so much potential also what's with that idiots parents they literally are so cruel to him but he still couldn't leave that abusive home they thought it was for his best i just have to say author you took anti hero tag to whole another level instead you must have wrote emotional fool
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"It's okay nee-chan she can handle it by herself, besides were almost there but besides that, her strength was extraordinary, speed, agility, ability to heal others too, and not even that she has extraordinary physical skills and extreme knowledge about magic, she is still a kid and that is questionable.
"Oh, lively as ever." She answered light heartedly, "Do you want me to get you some lemonade? I just made some for Steve, I'm sure he wouldn't mind sharing."