YaldaKim
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All in all I'm trying to figure out why these always read like wish fulfillment works.The MC always winds up becoming an absolute nightmare and as far from thier original self as possible. All while failing to realise they're far worse than those they hated in the first place.Truly it would be nice if for once the old addage of When seeking revenge be sure to dig two graves would happen.
Mc character development was insane the quality is good the fights were detail and fun to read,but the most important is backstory and world building
I read till chpter 119. I have given this novel plenty of chances despite the rough beggining. The early plots were just the same as one novel i read before i think it ws i will kill the author. Despite this i gave it a shot as i wanted to see where this would go next. I was quite relieved that it was a good one since the mc was calm and smart. He was dense as a japanese beta mc thugh despite the author giving him background of having past relationships. But what ticked me off the most was the forced plot of character development. The authour wuld pull some bs reasons why the mc lost to the rank 2 and if that wasnt enough development he would beat him and lose to the rank one with another bs that the rank 1 awakened his second gift. Also the girls were somehow interested in him from the start with the reason of hes interesting well hes really not he was the weakest in the rank A class but somehow hes the point of interest. I would understand it nore if he was noticed after the fact of being promoted in rank faster than them. I especially hate the heroine Cecilia whose supposedly a sociopath that keeps fking with the mc. Overall, the plot in the beggining was ok even though it had similarities with the other novel and the flow of the pacing was great. The characters felt alive with each having thier on unique emotions sometimes getting along to each other and fighting when teasing one another. Ghe only problem I had was the forced plots for character development of the MC. Im sure it could have been done better the reasoning behind it was so unreasonable. Dont even get me started about the cringe speeches his friends gave him after he lost it felt so forced and out of place. On the other hand im also not a fan of having multiple entities behind the scenes manipulating the mc, one of which erased his fking memory when he got a gift and they were never mentioned again.
I am absolutely captivated by this book! I first discovered it on Facebook, and when I found out it was also available on Webnovel, I couldn't wait to dive in. The characters are so well-crafted, and Freya is definitely my favorite. The author has created an incredible plot, and I’m excited to see where the story leads. Vengeance through Passion is definitely a must-read!
Writing style is simple and easy to follow the story. Without giving too much away the characters are engaging and interesting to read and see what they decide to do next.
Really like the way you are developing story and characters. Started reading it as casual novel but found it really interesting. Please do update new chapters
"Why did I kill him?"
"Opzzzz ... I can feel the presence of supernatural beings in you."
"Just punch him over and over, but don't you dare kill him, you will pay 10 times of the payment."
"IYEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH SEEEE YOUUUUU MYYYY SUCKKKKEEEER SONNNNNNN!" My father answered with his Madisgood accent.
