I read up till ch. 60 and so far, it's not a bad story. On the other hand tho, I feel like the story moved away from the fact that Ian is supposed to be trying to save the world from the upcoming calamity, and is just focused on his relationship troubles. We're not being shown how his strength is increasing; he just jumps into things like a bull and somehow manages to get through with luck.
The MC acts very rashly and the author just uses plot armor to get him out of trouble. Ian is the second son of a Viscount but has attacked people of higher aristocratic positions than him many times with little to no consequence (no action from school authorities or teachers. In fact these guys are pretty much non-existent except for the guy who ran the swordsmanship class. We haven't been introduced to anyone else). So far he has just solved all his problems with mad violence which can only get him so far.
Summary: I think the story can be better
da*n Finally someone agrees with me.
I heard it on discord
Anyone knows when will the author continue this?
Its just a copy paste history
This must be the LN version of that one manga, there's a couple with a similar concept. Old man sage turns into a young girl.
I mean. Well, I forgot about this message so I’ll just give you like 5. Divine Hunter, Reverend Insanity, Lord of the Mysteries (just any of cuttlefish’s works) Ultimate Evolution. Deep Sea Embers - Monarch of Evernight. Trafford’s Trading Club. Legendary Mechanic, Astral Apostle and I personally dislike cooking dragon but sure. I then went on qidian and picked my favs on there - even if they aren’t ‘that good’ night of nomenclature or whatever. This game is too real. My Iyashikei game (Iyashikei? Idfk how to spell it, and the Google translated site ain’t helpin.) which reminds me of House of Horrors. And now the iffy ones - soul of Negary, and well… a few of I Eat Tomatoe’s works. Now reading this you may think me a nerd in Chinese fiction ( ugh- the fact I can’t mention cultivation is stupid - you neeeed to get into them. And don’t read off martial world or whatever it’s called - xyz websites cause that sh*t be so cliche (webnovel of Chinese novels makes anyone cringe). i nerd all 3
Do you really have a harem?
I'm finally here to drop my own review after reading 33 chapters. I'm honestly loving it so far and I hope I will continue to love it this way. So far from what I've read of this writer's other works, I hope to also see those heated moment and scenes you write in the other books that makes one wish they were the FL.
Sometimes words are missing, it feels rushed and careless.The story starts good and stays that way until ca. chapter 35 or 40, not sure.Then fights will take multiple chapters and there will be only fights, no story.Bored I stopped reading.
hello ? guys it's the author just promoting this book hope you like it?
What a shameDepressingFirst it was smooth then came to NTR(even dough its was not her lover but his property got raped by a vampire prince and forgot about it ). Sadly the plot got worse as the chapters go by.Thanks author you got me temporarily happy i even enjoyed it for at least 30 chapter