The story has a good premise, but sadly the plain mc, which you can confuse for an passerby makes it boring. And the story developement is sometimes illogically forced.
Too much details, it's too irritating to read, please author, reduce the details by removing the unecessary ones and only focus on the plot, chapter 27 in but the plot doesn't forward at all, over 10 chapters of useless and unecessary details that even if you skip it, you can still know the plot overall. DON'T PAD THE WORD COUNT BY UNECESSARY DETAILS...
An excellent wrap-up to a compelling story with gripping fights and heartwrenching plotlines. I loved Zaos, Ameria, Aleni, The Bloody Knights, and all the other characters that we followed along with. Thank you for the thought and effort to keep the quality of the story good all the way through.
One of the best novels I’ve ever read, over 1k chapters in and im still always excited for the next. If you are debating on whether or not to read, just jump into it. The main character is always growing and learning more. Thank you for this book.
I cannot go to school today"Said little Peggy Ann McKay."I have the measles and the mumps,A gash, a rash and purple bumps.My mouth is wet, my throat is dry.I'm going blind in my right eye.My tonsils are as big as rocks,I've counted sixteen chicken pox.And there's one more - that's seventeen,And don't you think my face looks green?My leg is cut, my eyes are blue,It might be the instamatic flu.I cough and sneeze and gasp and choke,I'm sure that my left leg is broke.My hip hurts when I move my chin,My belly button's caving in.My back is wrenched, my ankle's sprained,My 'pendix pains each time it rains.My toes are cold, my toes are numb,I have a sliver in my thumb.My neck is stiff, my voice is weak,I hardly whisper when I speak.My tongue is filling up my mouth,I think my hair is falling out.My elbow's bent, my spine ain't straight,My temperature is one-o-eight.My brain is shrunk, I cannot hear,There's a hole inside my ear.I have a hangnail, and my heart is ...What? What's that? What's that you say?You say today is .............. Saturday?G'bye, I'm going out to play!
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Such a very captivating and fantastic storyActually best of the best?Author should keep this up!!!I love this very muchAnticipating for chapter 5 soon???
Any way to get a physical copy? I like the series so far but I love to have physical books to read too! Please let me know and keep up the good work!
I didn't even read a single chapter of this novel.author you should do something about the picture you choose for novel cover, even though these drawings are good but you should use picture like other novels.sometimes I didn't even want to read the synopsis just because these colorless drawing feels like an eyesore.
The author has nice concept and a genius perspective in writing a story. Sure, there are some tiny errors but a little more hard work will help the story go far. Good luck author
i like it.....................yes that's it also he Fights Slimes with his Sclong Have a SPECIAL MOVE LITERALLY CALLED C##K SLAM Never Laughed this hard.
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