Havent read. But can I guess . Is it a summoner class?
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INCOMPLETE !!! Once again another "completed" scam. webnovel should be truthful if it is dropped or hiatus rather than putting it as completed when it's not.
After reading 20 chapters of your story~First chapters are big headache. Your style is something hard for me. I don't talk about grammar or something...Later - story is really better to read. But still something tickles me. But hey! Idea is very good and I wish you the best! This is something fresh for sure. Just without first chapters.
Most people from WN and RR already know the settings for this novel. Beloved by everyone, missed by many...If only the Author didn't have his period back then ? .. Anyway, this novel unfortunately lacks a bit compared to the original, doesn't flow as good and is a bit too cliché, but the story is still really interesting and I can't say if the more advanced chapters become better. No masterpiece, but still good to read and worth it if you want to binge away your day.
Characters are one dimensional, the Mc is supposed to have "positive" karma but acts like a normal teenager and doesn't do much for the reader to be invested in him. The world building is poor and relies on established tropes
I had read lots of negative reviews about this novel, but who would say that almost all of them are on the dot! The Mc is extremely unfriendly, and it is almost impossible for me to agree with most of his actions; I do not care much about the magic theme or how these eel changes happen, but there are simply so many inconsistencies in the plot! He claims to be extraordinarily lazy in the early chapters, and a few chapters later he says he is not someone who leaves things for later and does everything as soon as possible. The whole story is full of obvious macho comments every few chapters. There is also the fact that every character that mc meets coincidentally becomes part of the story somehow. As a police beauty hates him the moment he meets him, and a few chapters later she is forced to ask him for help because the police force needs an extremely specific service that only the newly founded company of mc performs. Or in an episode at the restaurant; he offends a woman and two men by going to breakfast and acting in a hypocritical way, and in fact these two men were part of a gang that continues to chase after him once and the woman also has a relative who needs help of mc to be cured. There are also consistent irrational nationalist acts; At one point he is literally going to steal Japanese technology and the whole time he is depreciating them and talking about destroying some of his ships for convenience on the way. Not to mention the translators! How I hate them! The review and editing are particularly bad, and a chapter between 38 and 39 is missing! Literally a lot of people commented on this in Chapter 38, a lot of people commented on the 39; they kept commenting on it in Chapters 40, 41 and even 42, and so far no one has packed it! Do any of you even read the comments ?! I hate this novel with all my might. Well, not to say that I'm irrational, mc is smart and interesting only in the moments when he discovers or invents a new utility for the 'powers' of the eel, and the release rate is good enough, but I'm definitely not voting like five stars in that because the general that this novel deserves is 1.
Got me invested in the story and then it hasn't been updated for weeks now. wasted my time reading up till now because author abandoned the story before it even really kicked off. the number of chapters is just an illusion to the real length of the story... it had potential but the author ended up dropping it
Everything is great about this book, However the MC is on the extreme end of the spectrum. He got a system that turns him into a vampire, he researches about vampires, he then acts as if the system is just him hallucinating. The MC is sooo stupid your brain cells will kamikaze each other just from reading his thought process and actions. Since this story is in a futuristic setting, I hope MC finds something to cure his extreme brain cell seppuku soon. Of course this is only my review for the first 20ish chapters, if my brain cells survive to the point where MC has the IQ higher than a retarded squirrel I will update. TLDR Character -9999/10
probably one of the best reads yet. this story is very well put together. omg I cried at the end . THIS IS A MUST READ !!!!
The best book I have read so far. It gives you everything in one story from hurt, betrayal and angry feelings to love, passion and forgivness, spiced with a little magic...
wow it's getting real close to everyone finding out they truth and Jenna to go down like they titanic