The narrating skills i.e conversation between a people is extraordinary... In chapter one... there are some spoilers which creates the interest (the lost man in front of gate)
First, you agree to the writer naming the work with this name. I've watched 130 chapters, so far the only instance of NTR was as a form of revenge,I couldn't quite get my head around the world building but it looks good and authenticWhat I liked most was the character of the hero, vengeful and funny,The description is bad. It doesn't tell you that the world will be reverse. Women are in control, men are at homeSome of NTR's fans might not like it, and I'm not one of them. I started this novel by chance because of the mood, and it's good that I did because the name and description don't make any sense. I'd like to change it.I highly recommend you read the novel, it is enjoyable. The hero's character is unusual, he loves revenge, and his jokes are dangerous.
Is not going to be long winded review, but the grammar could be improved and also his style of writing. But English is not his first language and I think I don’t have problem with that. I’m just trying to be honest here.But let’s talk about the story itself. Marvelously crafted. Small details decorating the story to know and understand out character is not only one sided but has a human emotion. The world build is pretty interesting too. Sometimes you don’t have to tell everyone what’s going on but can actually show them what they have in the story. Like when the author introduces technology to the era where martial arts reigning supreme. Overall this could be really good story!
..Shitty of the ****tiest mc, a million year old demon lord reincarnates and all of a sudden becomes retarded, can barely cultivate, can’t fight for ****, can’t use his experience from past life in anything useful and most of all he panics everytime somebody attacks him instead of being the million year old demon lord...If it wasn’t cause of having nothing else to read I wouldn’t bother forcing myseöf to sit through this shitty cringefest which makes me literally scream out loud and smash something cause of how retarded mc isOver and out, don’t read unless you got a spare phone cause you might smash yours
Because so far it only has three chapters (at the time I read this), the plot is still unclear. I hope the author could develop more and answer the questions that might arise in readers. Writing-wise, I see rooms for improvement. With more practice, you're good to go. Learn by reading other books as well to help you construct better words and nuances, how to describe certain things. Best of luck dear author ✨ Don't ever give up!
This indeed is a great sci-fi, an amazing alien-tech story. Just the chapter one was enough to get me drawn into the story. Keep it up our dear author.My review is that you should work more on the writing quality, most times, the dialogues meant to be in (") are not. Apart from that, the story is amazing
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Story is great so far at sbout chapter 60 i seen a great improvement from the beginning reading becane alot easier only thing needed in this story is more R18 since its about a sex god it should be way more detail with more sex then just so they did it next...other wise its truly enjoyable to read keep it up more R18 if possible with details ?
The author has put a lot of effort into this book. Loved all the chapters so far had a different approach than most of the novels, it's a must read for all looking for something new.
The book is intriguing primarily because of the villainous trait of the main character. Not too thrilled about the beginning but deciding to give the future chapters a chance didn't disappoint. Everyone's happy cuz there's no romance, geez. This part ticked me off at first. Okay, I'm a fan of romance but I noticed that with the present storyline, including romance would ruin everything. Where would you even add it? It would only give Mike a weakness and I'm pretty sure that's the last thing ve needs right now. However, I expect less robotic side characters. World building is excellent but what brought down the ratings from 5.0 is the lacking character design and unstable writing quality. Poor at the beginning but gets better as the story progresses.
no sé ---- tu historia parece una combinación entre trama de Japón Shonen e historia China de varios cultivos. pero en vez de explicar mejor; llenas de trama en charla .............. .......... .......... ........... ............ me gusta que pase cosas cada cierto tiempo bajo cierta modalidad. en el cine, te das cuenta que la modalidad es lo que hace interesante la historia. cada pequeña toma de algo minucioso que lo hace distinto a otro.
This review is after I finished all the current chapter.For author first book I'll say it's great.Now my opinion over the novel, there's a lack of editing and some sentences are a bit incomprehensible.MC is born with everything, multiple divine physique, a mother who stand at the top and also in a sect who's also at the top. It's not a bad thing if only MC know how to stay humble but here it's hard to say ( he's a big hypocrite, saying it's bad to be arrogant and proud and look down at other to a girl even though he himself is like that but just doesn't show it ).Interaction between each characters lack humanity like they're robot just repeating phrase given to them.We still don't know much about the world but it seem pretty big so just wonder how author will describe/present it to us .Anyways nice novel to pass time