Love it so far. (10ch in)
well the story was interesting upto some chapters but well split personalities and mind/personality manipulation(with/without Mc realising it) and stuff aren't my cup of tea .... so yeah I'm stopping.....but it was a good read
Well written and thought out story. Can be confusing at times but it won't last long. It's a decent read in my opinion but it's not for me, it's too boring or what can I say ummmm.......... Story feels kinda bland for my taste. You can give it a try before Deciding yourself.
This is a great story, it ought to be a hit. If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact adaren06*@*gmail.com(delete *）.
It's trash. Actually maybe worse than that, some trash is recyclable. I don't know who the target audience is with a psycho MC like this story has but I hope I never meet them. If you've ever read a bad story whereas every man the MC meets wants to r*pe, murder and steal from them. This is a story from those peoples perspective. Why would anyone want to root for them, I don't know. Even terrible stories treat these characters as cannon fodder to show how much better their MC is. One of the worst trail reads I've read. You've been warned.
Hi, Just want to once again add that this is my first story so it is inevitable that i will make mistakes, I apologise for that but i'm doing this for fun, so don't expect a lot.Feedback is always welcome as i do want to look for ways to improve, and I don't a specific stuff set out so if you have any suggestions then you can also leave them and if i find it good i'll implement it. Hopefully you enjoy this and if not then fair enough. ThanksGave it 3 stars as i don't want to rate my own story.
I'm only 28 chapters into the story, but so far, I'm hooked! Interesting plot, descriptive writing, and honestly if the author hadn't said anything, I would have thought that English was his first language. So far, this story is definitely 5 Stars and I hope the author starts writing chapters daily!!
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I'm sorry to give such a low rating but the author doesn't know what to write.I don't mean grammar, I'm not English and I can understand history very well.He writes without thinking about future or previous chapters, he focuses only on the current story arc.Take for example when the Lin family is kidnapped: The parents are weak and the protagonist has to bow, huh no, plot twist, they are actually much stronger than they show! This is revealed in the future, but then why did the father allow his family to be kidnapped?But it doesn't matter, it's a bad thing but it didn't bring this to the drop, but the exact same thing happens shortly after (shortly after the parents reveal their power), even worse than in the beginning.The protagonist does nothing when his mother and sister are taken away in front of him, despite the fact that the enemy has said he wants them both, making it clear what he wants the two women ...I continued reading to find out the motivation, which marked the drop of the series:"Oh no, because if you intervene, your father will have a block, it doesn't matter if your sister and your mother are violated." (The phrase is not quite like that, but the gist is this. We know that nothing will happen, since the author is not faithful to what he writes and invents things to create plot twists that break the plot).This is why I dropped, but there are a lot of smaller errors, which don't make the story understand.Like the conflict of the two souls within the protagonist, which was not transmitted at all. Conflict? Nothing ever happened between the two souls, it's just a stretch for the growth of the protagonist.The relationships of the characters that come out of nowhere.The fact that the protagonist loves animals (even when he was on earth, written as someone who defended and saved animals), and then makes them die only because they can be brought to life.In short, there are many errors of writing (not English).Besides this is an unoriginal story, I have never read astral pet shop or what it's called, so I don't judge the beginning. I just say that he does not quote but copies many things, such as the character of Momonga (not a quote), the tribulations of the sky / lightning, the examination of the tamers which is identical to two other stories (theory to a very famous one, and practical punching beasts to improve their strength, which you should have already read in another fairly famous story).In short, I do not recommend the story.The rating is not a precise star, a little more (1,8), since it has some nice chapters, but it is not enough for the two stars. I struggled to read up to chapter 300+, as I didn't want to drop until I figured things out, but that chapter is pretty awful.
I likeit about all the characters .And the plot is very captivating to say the least.the flow is well planned.the English language is well utilised.i love the story.
very very familiar story. although it appears so late, the storyline is worthy. well, i have read it long time ago and accompanied my youth.