I like the story so far 9/10 hope to see a evil mc . and lots of suffering for our mc the emotions portrayed 10/10 and please don't have the mc fall in love with his current mental state that would be impossible but he has hormones so mistakes can happen if u know what I mean ? after all he is still a human
it's decent but the biggest issue Is locking chapters at chapter 14 that's a crazy move that i am completely against because 14 chapters is not enough of a sample size for a story you can't really tell if you're going to like it or not and it just seems so greedy to lock chapters so early.
Amazing work and character development. ♥️♥️
I gotta say I never thought someone would put this much work into a book, thanks, this is awesome. Please don't drop this book, especially the world setting, it's awesome.
So, we have two people right here (till 7th chapter) who have clearly reincarnated, reborn. Wei Zhiruo/ or the heroin is someone who has taken over someone else's body. Opposite to her, Wei Ziya is someone who had her body stolen in her previous life. Definitely, Wei Zhiruo is something Wei Ziya as a victim will abhor; and with valid reasons. Having her life-stolen, and watching her body do things as a bystander - that's clearly the worst fate anyone could have suffered, and seeing it happening again to one of her sisters? That's a clear reason for antagonism. But with the world at the brink of end, does she have time to think about things like this? Wei Ziya is clearly ready to die anytime this time, because she knows her limits. She knows she will never have a chance at getting things back to before, or save anyone in one years’ time.
The Novel has a promising plot with likable characters. They feel lifelike. someone you could relate with. The use of real-world locations makes imagining the story better. Although it's not perfect but still I'm looking forward to the upcoming chapters.
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Awesome book so far, definetly give it a shot, I love it
Well in my opinion it's pretty good. Not sure how valued my opinion is though?
Love to see more Rap novels on this platform and music genre in general keep up the good work
Don't bother reading this story. From random periods to very long sentences. Just from chapter 1 you can tell no work was put into this story. It is like a really, really rough draft
novel is good, I want more chaptersFL has siblings they like each other, also she is strong yet living in poor environment But bad relatives …