Everything is good and all. But the MC is too arrogant and mentally unstable at times. The author tried too hard to make him interesting but instead made him mental. And dude he is a 30 y/old in the inside so be should be calm and mature enough but heck no he behaves like a 3 year old. He has too much overconfidence .
Disclaimer- review made at chapter 200Pretty good so far. Doesn't excel at anything in particular, but very solid in every aspect.writing quality: 4*Good. I mean, there's not much more to say. No glaring issues, decent VSPaG. Not mind-blowing enough for 5 stars, but more than enough for a Webnovel.Story development: 4*Excellent so far. Relatively slow paced, but always interesting and has an overarching plot that is starting to come into play now.Character design: 4*This is a weird one. Sometimes the characters are weird and behave slightly awkwardly compared to previously, while other times I (mentally) squeal in delight due to a surprising but great decision to add a new dimension to a character or give them a closure that they need in a story like this. Overall though, the reason the book scores well despite its inconsistencies is the linking of characters we met previously with new plot points, which works superbly. The obvious example is the MC discovering his new body's past, but other examples include the village leader and the dungeon, as well as one of the MC's quests with the first person he meets after his "reincarnation".updating stability: 5*Honestly just great. I give big props to anyone that can consistently release a chapter a day every day of the week, and doubling that just impresses me further.World background: 4*This is 4* due to the story still being in its nascent stages. What we have seen so far is pretty standard, but interesting nonetheless. We have the growing village, the nearby biomes and other villages leading to a few larger towns, and then a capital city further away with currently unknown expanses on the way. Politically, we know of the crown and the larger families plus a small insight into some of their allies and enemies. At the moment, the monsters are quite underdeveloped background-wise, to the point some readers questioned the morality of killing them, but I at least trust the author has a plan in this aspect.Overall, great read, and I recommend it so far if this genre is your sort of thing. I will try to answer any questions people may have if I see them, and sorry if my review seems too surface-level; in actuality I'm mainly doing this to get to 10 reviews for level for of the comment badge.
I like this novel, with slow Pace and the MC is not to oveepowered at the beginning, and he must scrap materials from zombies he kill to unlock the fitures of STEIN, hope the author can write this novel to the end :) happy reading ;)
gresso and yrah forever. i like their story
I love this book, am currently reading I know how you taste Mr ceo, just wanted to know how are they related with the Steels?
Just by reading the summary I felt it was something good and guess what it really was!!!!!!!!!! I love it.
Can we skip Junie’s story, and let Tony succeed so he’s brought back to life and is Ari’s new mate?? Please... I don’t want to deal with Luca again he doesn’t deserve her
This book was amazing! It truly kept your interest. Would like to read more about Shayla and Cole. ❤️
great book
Can anyone tell me about the conclusion where can I find it or is it written yet
I love this book, but the chapters seem to be getting shorter and far between, I waited three weeks for the last chapter and it was a two minute read.
Five stars