Please update the next chapter please???????????????????????????? ?????The story is cool ?????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
Is the book a harem novel?I have seen many novels that start like this and always introduce several harem members down the road. You i8
I decided to read this from all the positive reviews but im incredibly disappointed. This novel is your ,average full of cliches, copy of all the novels that came before. Extremely unoriginal.
So Is Young Demon dead or... I bet you feel disconnected from the story after almost two months of hiatus? The motivation is not there right? I might be wrong... #ReturnOfYoungDemon... I also kind of like this fic since it brings me memories of my first ever story in this platform "Traversing the Omni-realities" before Webnovel messed with my first acc? RIP
I enjoy this story,I really am,but at this point,it looks like author just dragging the story.I mean some chapter which could be conclude in 2 or 3 chapter have been dragged into 10+,because sometimes a whole chap just fill with one character though and author like to explain something too detail that sometimes it's not necessary at all.Until now,I can't see where exactly where this story is really going,it has been 100++ and the mc is still 5 years old.
This all is just my opinion and thoughts as a reader and overall author has done a good work??
i really like idea of your book its a fantastic story and i hope you continue to update i really loved it and i also recommend everyone to add it to their reading list
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Good stuff so far! The story is intriguing, but I recommend having a better description of events. I feel like you've heard this before but, "show, don't tell." Other than that, it's a good read
i really hope this get picked, oooh i cant wait for it, but... i really shouldnt expect too much since the bigger the expectations if its not met the greater the disappointment. REALLY THEY SHOULD PICK THIS =∆= , i really dont see much novels like this one where the focus is streaming / webcasting.
Dialogs are dull, characters are one dimensional and i can't describe how much dumb mc is. He's literally walking through the fire and can't comprehend why the person in front of him is surprised.
World background is okay, to some extent it's interesting.
Overall i wouldn't recommend it unless author revise it
I would very much like this novel to be picked. It is interesting, unique, and has a good flow. The only thing I’m potentially worried about is the pacing. I fear that he is getting strong too quickly and will run out of routes to grow stronger. But it had to be done in the first 40 chapters to get people to vote, so maybe the pacing will slow down. Alternatively, it’s just a translated novel and it doesn’t care about getting selected and that’s just how the pacing is gonna go
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